jillyson
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Twozaks in Other Realms
[M0:6]"Now where have they gone? I seem to have lost my marbles again!" [ss:Luscious Lavender]
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Post by jillyson on Jun 4, 2011 9:03:07 GMT -5
Still can't get Blogger to let me leave a comment, which worries me, because I was planning to post there from now on! Loved the new Bios and Matt's house is cool, but the lot placement makes it amazing! That he has those views makes all the difference!
It was an interesting chapter, getting to know the family again. So sad about Mason - it looks like his parent's passing really took a toll on him! Hopefully, Matt's influence will be a good one for him.
Looks like Kiara's already taken herself right out of the picture, and it looks like that was a good thing. Somehow I don't think his brother is the only problem between them. Just little things like her parking to block the driveway show a selfishness that must have shown itself in other ways before we met her.
Can't wait to see the brother's next move!
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amylu1988
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Keeper of the Psychologists
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Post by amylu1988 on Jun 4, 2011 12:53:10 GMT -5
I finally caught up with this today, brilliant stuff. You're such a great writer, Nygirl, you work situations wonderfully and really get characters across. I loved all the early stuff with Amiee and Everett, and the plot with Shelby, and Amiee making her way in the world, and getting her art out there. The engagement and the wedding were gorgeous, and I love that you put up polls for the decision, the dress and venue, it really added to the story. So sad to see Amiee and Everett go, but Matthew and Mason are already filling the story with plot and presence. Can't wait to see what happens next and see where life takes these boys. Great story Nygirl, it's been a pleasure to read.
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Post by symphony on Jun 8, 2011 5:53:18 GMT -5
Oh joy! Don't we just love those family members who takes advantage of people's good nature .... maybe Mason has a good influence on him this time - hope Matthew at least finds a job
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