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Post by acid on Feb 11, 2011 15:58:56 GMT -5
In general Jared's just being paranoid I think. He probably won't be around much longer with that attitude he's got going.
Azaria's going to meet Troye very soon: sooner than she thought. (The chapters will be up soon. I gotta get pics)
Davrin's ready to escape and claim his true love. Maybe this time he'll do it properly. I certainly hope so.
I think Az already knows who her heart belongs to but given the circumstances under which they met it's no surprise that she keeps denying it.
I'm really sorry the chapters are moving slowly though. I'm trying to tie everything up together. And now that I'm back at university I won't be able to get updates up as often as I usually do.
Jill I think once they have their little family together, Davrin's going to spoil him rotten. He'll probably give them a bit of a run around  who knows... |
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Post by jillyson on Feb 12, 2011 11:56:00 GMT -5
Well, with Jared cleaning up his act, there might just be a fair race for Az's affection - that is, once Davrin re-enters her life! At least she's starting to realize her true feelings for Davrin...I wonder if he's having similar thoughts in his prison? I can't wait to see what comes next!
As for school/RL/updates, believe me. No one understands how life gets in the way of our simmies! Lol! I wish I had time to get one out once a week, so I don't know how you all manage to do them more often! Don't worry - take as much time as you need. We're not going anywhere! |
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Post by acid on Feb 15, 2011 8:39:42 GMT -5
Jill: If Az will take him back after all the mean things he's said. Sometimes it's just easier to walk away from something that isn't making you happy.
Davrin misses her deeply... she may possibly be his first and only love. I'm just waiting for the weekend to put up the next two chapters where you'll find out why he did what he did... besides wanting to exact his vengeance on the citizens of Bridgeport.
Qui: I think she's always had those feelings but she just didn't want to admit it. Davrin only set the ball in motion... Jared could have easily opposed his urges to drink himself into a stupor. But he didn't and now he's paying for it. Az and Dav are meant to be... the former just doesn't realise it but for the sake of Troye she'll keep good relations. She doesn't believe in isolating her kids from their father (well that's with the twins...) I just realised I'll be writing tests like every week but fortunately three of those tests are like mini quizzes so i can find time to write a few paragraphs. Sims should be a major - I think i'd pass it with a first class A  or maybe a B. |
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Post by jillyson on Feb 18, 2011 13:28:54 GMT -5
He grew up SO adorable!
Oh, poor little Troye! How can his "parents" keep turning a blind eye to how bad he has it at that school and get him out of there?
What a sweet boy - I hope his real parents show up soon and make things right for him! My heart is breaking for him!
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Post by valpre1983 on Feb 21, 2011 8:08:02 GMT -5
On The VoiceTrish, I'm still utterly, irrevocably in love with your writing. The relationships are so complex and the situations (between Jared and Az) are so real, it's such a beautiful disaster you're creating with these two. Az knows what's going on, and Jared listens to the voices more than he listens to his wife. It's so tragic what Dav is doing, but he's still my man.
Great job! On Ponderment,I love your use of flashback, the way you switch between reality and memories, it's such a smooth transition, and well written.
I'm glad to see Jared want to get some help at least. On Growing PainsWhat little monsters those parents have bred! I wonder if they know their kids are bullies. And Troye's parents too, how can they not stop this madness. He's such a cutie, he has a lot of his dad in him
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Post by acid on Feb 28, 2011 9:21:15 GMT -5
Jill and Val - Growing Pains Little monsters indeed! But like most people consumed by fear of things they know little of, they don't really know how to treat Troye because he's different. I think his adoptive parents are just tolerating it to avoid a human-vampire war. :? I don't know why they put up with it. He looks a lot like Davrin. The only thing Az seems to pass on to her kids is her hair colour  which really isn't much... pity. But soon he will be with his parents again - it's already written The Voice Az did try to warn J but he didn't listen so serves him right! lol I'm so biased. In my opinion. Dav just planted the seed and Jared sowed it so now he must reap the consequences. It probably wouldn't have been easy to just ignore the voice but he could have tried...  Ponderment I just wanted to fast forward through some time. I'll probably keep to the style just to get a little more story in the chapters. I don't want to write a chapter for each event and then clutter up the chapter page. Thanks so much for reading though. As I've told you so many times before my writing really doesn't compare to yours and so many of the other writers here. The stories and characters are so real that I feel like I'm right in there.  |
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Post by jillyson on Mar 11, 2011 9:37:33 GMT -5
Update from acid's blog:Thursday, March 10, 2011+ Internet-Less + Hey guys so just a quick update about my RL We moved this weekend! *gaspshockdie* Actually I like the new place a lot ^_^ Buuuuuuutttt I am currently without internet access except on campus - which doesn't really solve anything So once my internet is up and running at home I'll post up new chapters. I'm so so so so sorry. Hope you guys understand but thank you all for reading I really appreciate the support xoxo Trish Don't worry, Trish, we'll be here when you're back up and running!
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Post by acid on Mar 25, 2011 4:22:42 GMT -5
Thanks so much Jilly  Good news! My net is up and running  So I'll be slowly putting chapters up over the next couple of days Thanks for all the understanding guys |
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 25, 2011 5:35:03 GMT -5
Trish  good to hear you have some net now. Looking forward to your updates |
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Post by qui on Mar 25, 2011 7:43:47 GMT -5
!!! I've been thinking about Troye since that last update! My eyes shall be glued to my screen all weekend!!
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Post by acid on Mar 28, 2011 5:30:08 GMT -5
Val! Congrats again on making mod may it be an awesome experience. Qui! Sorry for not updating this weekend. I thought I'd be done studying for marketing but the chapters were like mini books themselves. And all my studying was in vain - they cancelled the test today because of student protests  So I'm going to use the free time to update.
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 28, 2011 5:37:22 GMT -5
Yay for an update |
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Post by qui on Mar 28, 2011 6:38:41 GMT -5
no problem I'll just be happy to see it! |
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Post by acid on Mar 28, 2011 15:54:26 GMT -5
1.26 The short and crappy update that'll hopefully suffice until tomorrow?  I'm hoping my tutees ( ) don't pitch up tomorrow then I can do some catching up with my reading ^_^
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Post by qui on Mar 28, 2011 16:18:53 GMT -5
NOTHING CRAPPY ABOUT IT! I have a premature grin because I believe that's Davrin. I hope I'm right. Having a   |
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which really isn't much... pity.