seaweedy
Quiet Observer
[M0:2][ss:Teal Time!]
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Post by seaweedy on Jan 26, 2011 13:16:52 GMT -5
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jillyson
Diligent Librarian
Twozaks in Other Realms
[M0:6]"Now where have they gone? I seem to have lost my marbles again!" [ss:Luscious Lavender]
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Post by jillyson on Jan 26, 2011 19:44:29 GMT -5
I just finished "Cult of the Indigo Llama", so now I'm up to the above tale. This is such a clever legacy! You manage to make me laugh, feel sad, and be thrilled all in the same chapter! The struggles with post-partum were so genuine, then to have baby Handler talk like a criminal mastermind - I laughed out loud! What a great husband and father Xander turned out to be!
And in the next gen, I was SURE that Handler was going to father children with the whole "cult"! lol! Glad he didn't though, cuz we wouldn't have the devil spawn we call Sigsmund! I'm reading his part now, and Baby Notorious looks like an angel compared to him! He really took that evil gene and ran with it!!!
Edit: Finished!!! Wow, what an unexpected finale! There were so many curves in there, I had no idea what was coming next!!! Very well done, Seaweedy!!!
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Post by valpre1983 on Jan 27, 2011 11:51:21 GMT -5
This was such a beautiful, emotive chapter. It was kind of disturbing emotionally to see Notorious letting himself go, but you portrayed his guilt so well, and his wife's reaction was classic, but not totally unexpected, considering their relationship. I'm glad his scheming had a positive outcome for Brandy. He needs to start forgiving himself, if he's serious about apologizing to Brandy. This was one of the best reads I've come across in a long time.I'm sad it's over, but I look forward to your next project.
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seaweedy
Quiet Observer
[M0:2][ss:Teal Time!]
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Post by seaweedy on Jan 27, 2011 11:52:59 GMT -5
Hello, thanks so much y'all. I appreciate the positive feedback very much.
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