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Post by dblondepimpett on Jan 27, 2011 11:31:58 GMT -5
I just got caught up.  again Door and Friends I loved their first kiss he was soo sexy the way he just grabbed her and kissed her. I am pretty sure even though her mind is racing with the fear of him being found or him having to leave she is smiling to herself about that kiss! I sure would be! Chaos WOW! I hope Lusious does not find out about Jonathan. Juniper and Willow will probably be frightened for a little bit when they can't find the babies! Where was Elric? Over all I really liked the updates! I would have read all the past updates sooner on;y I have hardly had time to even get on my lap top at all unless it is for school. |
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Post by qui on Jan 27, 2011 12:15:56 GMT -5
I just adore Jonathan! That last shot of him with the babies made my heart skip a beat!
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Post by nygirl on Jan 27, 2011 15:33:22 GMT -5
I am glad that you all enjoyed the last two updates, I will be updating later as I am working on it now! Hopefully I can get this all in one shot and not forget anyone! Karima - Jonathan froze plain in simple, in a way he also was a coward by not jumping in and helping Willow, but it is understandable seeing that Lucius is a vampire...but he did redeem himself when he snuck in scooped up them babies.
- Elric was going to play a small role in this chapter but I couldn't get him to stop laughing and I didn't feel like messing around with the Debugger so I put him off to the side. It was funny though I could hardly concentrate on writing the chapter because the pictures kept popping up in my head making me laugh!
Valpre- Thank you I am glad that you got the feelings and chemistry I was hoping to portray in the "Friends" prompt. I just love the second last shot of their kiss, their lips just barely touching...one of my favs!
- Juniper wasn't thinking, she just acts that is who she is, the only time she thinks is to devise a scheme or a ploy when her actions don't exactly give her the results she had hoped for.
dblondepimpett- The babies will be safe...And yes I am sure that Willow will freak when things start to clear out and she realizes the babies are gone.
- Elric, well he is MIA and I can't exactly say what is going on just yet but I assure you he didn't abandon his children. Qui- I love that picture too, it is so poignant! *Cracks her knuckles* Phew! I think that I got everyone! Thanks for reading hoping to have the next prompt coming soon, this one will be short, and then it will be followed by another. |
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Post by qui on Jan 27, 2011 18:20:37 GMT -5
I need to get stranded on an island and pray that a Jonathan is stranded there too!
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Post by nygirl on Jan 27, 2011 18:23:25 GMT -5
I need to get stranded on an island and pray that a Jonathan is stranded there too!  |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Jan 27, 2011 18:36:12 GMT -5
 Me too,but would he want an old bag like me!lol!  ~ The pictures of Elezra & Jonathon were too cute!
~ He is taking his role as temp father,very seriously worrying about what they will eat!
~ He does not know what is going on,but at the very least the children are safe!
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Post by jillyson on Jan 27, 2011 18:50:27 GMT -5
This was so wonderful – Jonathan was so brave to save the girls, while that coward Elric ran off leaving them! Even Juniper never spared a thought for the girls – was even ready to give them Airelle as the “half-breed” she promised them until Willow blew the whistle on her!
By now, Willow must be out of her mind with worry, wondering where the babies are – if the vampire has left her alone yet!
I hope he takes Juniper and leaves! How sad to think of their beautiful home and gardens burned to a crisp over her selfishness.
Those pictures of Jonathan & Elezra were wonderful! (All your pics are wonderful, but those were so seamless - I swore she was really riding on his shoulders! |
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Post by nygirl on Jan 27, 2011 23:32:12 GMT -5
This was so wonderful – Jonathan was so brave to save the girls, while that coward Elric ran off leaving them! Even Juniper never spared a thought for the girls – was even ready to give them Airelle as the “half-breed” she promised them until Willow blew the whistle on her!
By now, Willow must be out of her mind with worry, wondering where the babies are – if the vampire has left her alone yet!
I hope he takes Juniper and leaves! How sad to think of their beautiful home and gardens burned to a crisp over her selfishness.
Those pictures of Jonathan & Elezra were wonderful! (All your pics are wonderful, but those were so seamless - I swore she was really riding on his shoulders! Thank you. The credit goes to the OPH's I would be lost in storytelling sometimes without them! they can make almost anything happen, like Elezra riding on Jonathan's shoulders! |
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Post by qui on Jan 28, 2011 0:01:20 GMT -5
That was shocking! I just knew she'd give herself to Lucious but I am very pleased that she didn't! Last word... ;D I love it! |
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Post by nygirl on Jan 28, 2011 0:22:09 GMT -5
That was shocking! I just knew she'd give herself to Lucious but I am very pleased that she didn't! Last word... ;D I love it! For the first time ever Willow wasn't about to put her life on the line for something Juniper did, and this wasn't selfish of her it was smart, she was right, it was about time that Juniper cleaned up her own messes and dealt with the consequence. How would she ever change if Willow continued to do it for her? Besides she wouldn't have trusted that the children would be cared for properly without herself around. ***Added a bloopers page to the story blog with some funny shots!*** |
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Post by valpre1983 on Jan 28, 2011 3:34:01 GMT -5
DawnThis was so sweet. Jonathan will make a good Daddy.
My jaw dropped when I saw the shots with Elezra on his shoulders. How did you do that? ChoiceThat could not have been an easy choice to make; I'm sad Willow was put in that position, and Juniper still sees herself as the victim in all this. God, I hate her, never thought I'd say it, considering I loved her when this started. But yep, I hated her now. I hate how selfish she is, the fact that she'd put her life first before her kids'. I hope she gets what's coming to her and more. I hope the vampires don't show her any mercy. And while we are on the subject of punishment, Elric too needs to get his just desserts, he has to be either dead or kidnapped for me to stop hating him, for his sake I hope it's one of the two. Because if he is alive and hiding under a rock somewhere, and watching all this chaos unfold I'll get inside my screen, and throttle the life from him.
Please let Willow find the strength to drag herself from the smoke and the flames.
Wonderful, wonderful visuals, and intense writing.
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Post by Aussie Karima on Jan 28, 2011 7:53:54 GMT -5
~ Lucius is lushess!!!!!
~ Back to the story,I'll just wipe the drool of the keyboard!lol!
~ She made the right call,it was about time Juniper cleaned up her own mess & she had no thought for what was being destroyed because of her,or the safety of anyone else!!!!
~ Loved it!(",)
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Post by dblondepimpett on Jan 28, 2011 10:35:02 GMT -5
Juniper is soo selfish not thinking of her children. I hope Jonothan finds Willow collapsed on the ground. I still can't believe Elric isn't there yet. I liked your updates It is very interesting |
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Post by nygirl on Jan 28, 2011 10:58:09 GMT -5
DawnThis was so sweet. Jonathan will make a good Daddy.
My jaw dropped when I saw the shots with Elezra on his shoulders. How did you do that? ChoiceThat could not have been an easy choice to make; I'm sad Willow was put in that position, and Juniper still sees herself as the victim in all this. God, I hate her, never thought I'd say it, considering I loved her when this started. But yep, I hated her now. I hate how selfish she is, the fact that she'd put her life first before her kids'. I hope she gets what's coming to her and more. I hope the vampires don't show her any mercy. And while we are on the subject of punishment, Elric too needs to get his just desserts, he has to be either dead or kidnapped for me to stop hating him, for his sake I hope it's one of the two. Because if he is alive and hiding under a rock somewhere, and watching all this chaos unfold I'll get inside my screen, and throttle the life from him.
Please let Willow find the strength to drag herself from the smoke and the flames.
Wonderful, wonderful visuals, and intense writing. I didn't actually get the idea until I thought to myself this kid can't climb up the hill herself that would be wrong! then i remembered what my dad always did...put me on his shoulders so I used the OPH's and placed Elezra on them while she was sitting and Jonathan happened to be looking at her so when i moved her towards him it looked as if he was looking up at her on his shoulders!
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Post by jillyson on Jan 28, 2011 21:38:30 GMT -5
I was so afraid WIllow was going to offer herself in Juniper's place - I'm SO glad she didn't! It was GREAT to see Juniper get hers - B*tch had it coming!!!! Lol!
I sure hope someone gets in there and saves Willow now!
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