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Post by nygirl on Jan 17, 2011 19:56:28 GMT -5
This story is written based on The Simfic50 Challenge, which is a challenge to write 50 sim fiction pieces based on prompts. Each chapter will begin with a prompt, please don't let the numbers confuse you the chapters are in order. This is my first try at it so I hope that I don't disappoint! (Thank you Valpre for turning me onto this, I am having fun with it!)  Genre: Paranormal Romance/DramaRating: M - brief nudity, sexual themes, violence, adult language, adult activities/situations (Applies to the series in it's entirety.)Type: SeriesSummary: A tale of family, friendship, love and betrayal, will the lives of those who inhabit The Lost Garden flourish, or will uncontrollable factors wreak utter chaos? With their tumultuous past can elves, humans and vampires find a way to co-exist, or will they destroy one another? ~ Chapter Guide ~Newest Chapter (s):HonorEnds |
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Post by jillyson on Jan 17, 2011 21:17:13 GMT -5
Yay, Elves!
Ugh! I can't believe how rotten Juniper is! And Poor Willow, having the affair shoved in her face everyday, but still being a good enugh soul to love the baby that came from it - espeically since her own mother only does so when she pleases! Erlic - how heartless can he be?
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Post by nygirl on Jan 17, 2011 21:29:26 GMT -5
Yay, Elves!
Ugh! I can't believe how rotten Juniper is! And Poor Willow, having the affair shoved in her face everyday, but still being a good enugh soul to love the baby that came from it - espeically since her own mother only does so when she pleases! Erlic - how heartless can he be?
I replied to your comment on the forum so I will place it here as well One would think he got what he deserved and that he may be just as rotten and Juniper seems, but there could be more to it than meets the eye  Hope you are enjoying the story thus far!  |
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Post by valpre1983 on Jan 17, 2011 23:47:05 GMT -5
OMG I  when I saw your screens. They are absolutely breathtaking, and the sims are beautiful. I just woke up now and I didn't get a chance to read, but on my coffee break at work, I'll read it |
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Post by qui on Jan 18, 2011 0:07:22 GMT -5
Yey you're doing the challenge too!
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Post by nygirl on Jan 18, 2011 0:28:48 GMT -5
Valpre - thank you! The fact that the setting behind the screens is absolutely wonderful probably helps, I sure as hell wouldn't mind living on an Island like that. It was a world I downloaded from the exchange, I just deleted all the rabbit holes and community lots and did a lot of face lifts to it with the landscape, worked on and off all weekend on getting it ready! I hope that you will enjoy the story, I have three more prompts coming all together as they were meant to be read together then I think I am done for the night, getting to easily distracted hehe.
Qui Yes, It looked like something very different than what I am used to and looked interesting as well so I had to give it a shot! Thanks for reading, and I hope that you are enjoying it!
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Post by valpre1983 on Jan 18, 2011 3:30:59 GMT -5
Juniper's such a sociopath, no conscience, no concept of right and wrong, and she makes for such an intriguing character. Absolutely enthralling. I think you did such an amazing job with the first five prompts, and I can't wait for more see, I told you, once you start writing the prompts, you get addicted |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Jan 18, 2011 3:36:10 GMT -5
;D I LOVE ELVES! ~ I have read all you have put out,& it touched me,made me mad & sad,(as this happened to me!But it was my husband & mother!don't worry it,was a long time ago,I was only 17!)I love your story so far,I can not believe how selfish Juniper is,when it is very clear that Elric still loves Willow with all his heart!
~ So sad!
~ I really enjoyed it & can not wait for more! |
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Post by valpre1983 on Jan 18, 2011 3:39:49 GMT -5
But I like Juniper. She reminds me of the green eyed monster in Krisis. They are both go-getters; they know what they want and how to get it, toughies for anyone who dares stand in their way. They are not afraid to push limits and boundaries, and dream up the impossible. If they could take all those qualities and turn them into something positive, imagine what an inspiration they'd be for other women... |
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Post by qui on Jan 18, 2011 10:57:05 GMT -5
you are moving fast like Val! Ha! You;re going to pass me soon too! lol
I feel bad for Willow and now for that baby! I'm glad you showed us what really happened! Now I feel like I can't blame Elric.
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Post by nygirl on Jan 18, 2011 12:37:32 GMT -5
you are moving fast like Val! Ha! You;re going to pass me soon too! lol I feel bad for Willow and now for that baby! I'm glad you showed us what really happened! Now I feel like I can't blame Elric. I wouldn't be singing Elric's praises just yet....yes he is in love with Willow and the betrayal wasn't exactly his fault, but he is no angel...  |
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Post by jillyson on Jan 18, 2011 13:27:41 GMT -5
OMG!!!
In a way I'm glad Elric didn't actually betray her, but how horrible to walk in on that scene! I do feel better about Elric after seeing that, but he needs to make things right and tell Willow what really happened two years ago!
Evil, evil Juniper!
And after looking at the spoiler above, now I REALLY don't know what to think! Lol! |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Jan 18, 2011 13:36:36 GMT -5
 I guess we will have to keep reading to find that out,hey Jilly! 
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Post by qui on Jan 18, 2011 14:41:44 GMT -5
I wouldn't be singing Elric's praises just yet....yes he is in love with Willow and the betrayal wasn't exactly his fault, but he is no angel... Well damn.. sounds like Willow needs to step over him and find herself a nice vampire or human! |
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Post by valpre1983 on Jan 18, 2011 14:45:07 GMT -5
LOL, Qui, Willow hates both vampires and humans, and the one man she gave her heart to is a sly fox in elven clothing |
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