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Post by seaweedy on Mar 12, 2011 9:10:47 GMT -5
Thanks so much, I had to put that screenshot for the title because it came out so well--usually when I try to capture a screenshot of a kiss, the characters look funny with their mouths all puckered up in a goofy way.
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 13, 2011 10:24:10 GMT -5
Wow, what a promise Genet demanded from Greer. I don't know how she expected this young man to not fall in love. I sort of get her reasons, but it's still a heavy promise to ask of a child! My heart melted at the last screen. Her very first kiss. It was, right? I hope it was everything she's always wanted. Mhh, I wonder what Teacher Genet will do when she finds out Greer broke his promise!  Let's hope she wasn't grooming him for herself. LOL. Just kidding  |
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Post by seaweedy on Mar 14, 2011 11:36:52 GMT -5
If it wasn't on the storyboard where I need to keep it clean, I would have considered having Genet angling for Greer herself--I am basing some of this story on RL experiences and my own drama club teacher did fall in love with a student.
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Mar 21, 2011 19:20:48 GMT -5
I had a teacher like that, too. Yuck!
I can't believe her mother!!! Just when she had a nice day with Greer, then a great surprise seeing her dad, and then that bombshell! And she makes her dad be the one to tell her. Ugh! That woman!!! And it looks like she's trying to get Lana to move in ith her dad - at least that's my guess.
Hurry up and update - I have to know what's going to happen!!!
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Post by seaweedy on Mar 22, 2011 10:31:27 GMT -5
I should have the next, and I think final update ready by the weekend! Thanks for reading, I never expected this series to go on for ten chapters and I've lost track of how many characters.
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Mar 22, 2011 19:31:02 GMT -5
Already? |
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Post by seaweedy on Mar 24, 2011 8:49:50 GMT -5
Actually, one of my readers has made a request, so there will be two more chapters. The last one will be an epilogue of sorts and I need Generations.
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 24, 2011 11:45:47 GMT -5
What? Two more chapters, no way. I insist, you can't end it so soon. Loved the latest scene. Lana's mom is such a cold woman. She and guidance counselor deserve each other. Glad to see Lana and Greer doing okay on the dating front  |
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Post by dblondepimpett on Mar 26, 2011 11:14:26 GMT -5
eeeek I love this series! I love how the name of each chapter is scene like how they are in plays. I also like that the schools drama club is name the twinbrook Junior Thespians because the word Thespian is the greek root word coming from Thespis who is thought to have written the first tragedy. I also like how you do a lot of background information to make it more detailed like bringing up Tennessee Williams A Street Car named Desire (One of my favorites). awesome awesome awesome!! I hope Lana doesn't have to choose to live with either her father or her mother!  Because living with her mother would be terrible, but that would mean she gets to stay with Greer. If she left to live with her dad then it would be terrible because that would mean she would have to leave greer and to him it would almost feel like how is ex left I think it is sad how they have to hide their love for each other.... Is this their senior year? Because College needs to come fast! |
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Post by seaweedy on Mar 28, 2011 11:06:23 GMT -5
dblondepimpett, Thanks so much for reading and the lovely compliments. I have enjoyed writing this series though I have had to start the game over now for the third time. Kind of maddening but totally worth it when I get such great feedback!
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seaweedy
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Post by seaweedy on Mar 31, 2011 12:37:07 GMT -5
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Mar 31, 2011 19:13:19 GMT -5
Oh there BETTER be an epilogue!!!
I was surprised that Greer decided to go with her father, but I realize he's the better parent for her, and that's important. It was a very mature decision on both of the kids parts. Her mother is such a selfish witch! Lana clearly takes after her father.
NOW HURRY UP AND SHOW US WHAT SHE WRITES!
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Post by seaweedy on Apr 1, 2011 10:56:50 GMT -5
I agree, I made her mother pretty awful. The current wife/mother in my legacy is not so nice either, I need to make a nice lady in an upcoming story for a change. Thank you for the read and the comments, Jillyson!
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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 2, 2011 11:50:53 GMT -5
Ah man, I'm so sad this is over now Not fair. But I like the way you ended it, leaves so many possibilities. And I have a a feeling their story is not finished. Or maybe it's just wishful thinking on my part  |
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Post by seaweedy on Apr 3, 2011 10:15:22 GMT -5
I am just waiting for Generations to conclude with an epilogue--assuming what I saw in the trailer will be included in the game.
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