seaweedy
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Post by seaweedy on Feb 21, 2011 14:14:58 GMT -5
Good suggestion, I think readers are happier with blogs. I am very nearly finished with this one and while I may continue to use the storyboard, I will duplicate future stories on a blog.
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Post by valpre1983 on Feb 22, 2011 13:01:17 GMT -5
Just wanted to let you know I've started reading this. I'm done with the 1st act and I'm hoping to squeeze in some once Chippy is asleep. Right now she wants to play with my hair and give me a makeover. The joys of being a mom *dramatic sigh*
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Feb 22, 2011 15:38:27 GMT -5
Awww. I want a make-over!!!!
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Post by Nancy01905 on Feb 22, 2011 17:19:31 GMT -5
Seaweedy you can add music to blogs i have done it to mine but i moved my storied to weebly and add music there as well www.playlist.com/ that what i use for music
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Post by valpre1983 on Feb 22, 2011 23:58:30 GMT -5
Jill, trust me, you don't want one from Chippy She made me look like clown last night Seaweedy, I'm all caught up now, and all I can say is WOW, I love this. I think I've told you this, but you have such an amazing, unique voice and I love, love, love all your pieces.
Fleur is such a trip...but in a good way. I like her character very much. Lana seems like your typical teenager everyone can identify with, and I love her to bits. Now, I don't know what's up with Greer, the way he just wants to see Lana only on Sunday's isn't cool. And about him, and Ms. Joyce, there's a story there, I can't wait to read it.
I loved your shots in this. Stunning, and you've given me so many ideas.
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seaweedy
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Post by seaweedy on Feb 28, 2011 18:04:38 GMT -5
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Mar 2, 2011 13:17:25 GMT -5
WOW! That was completely unexpected! I wonder if this has something to do with the way he treats Lana at school?
What a relief Lana's mother doesn't have to find out about what happened on the trip! That would've been the end of Drama club for sure!
And how nice to see Fleur being descent for a change - I have a feeling it won't last long. That girl has issues!
You really did a great job depicting the characters at the soup kitchen - very realistic and sympathetic! Great job!
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seaweedy
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Post by seaweedy on Mar 5, 2011 12:33:32 GMT -5
Thanks so much Jillyson. I am looking forward to a new chapter of your story.
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 5, 2011 13:13:45 GMT -5
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seaweedy
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Post by seaweedy on Mar 5, 2011 15:32:40 GMT -5
If you can get on the site, it is a fairly short update.
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 6, 2011 0:47:43 GMT -5
You were right, it is a short update. This made me sad. I didn't expect that about Greer's family. I like that he introduced Lana to his mom, I think it's a sign he's somewhat into her. Glad the drama teacher didn't tell the parents. Their punishment did a whole lot of good than being grounded for a month would have done. I'm looking forward to their Sunday date
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seaweedy
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Post by seaweedy on Mar 8, 2011 14:44:20 GMT -5
Thanks for reading, Valpre. It is so encouraging to get such great feedback.
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 9, 2011 12:01:52 GMT -5
No thanks needed. I love your writing. Now I'm patiently waiting for the next Scene
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seaweedy
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Post by seaweedy on Mar 9, 2011 18:35:08 GMT -5
Wait no more, after playing Browser Roulette with the storyboard all afternoon, I managed to publish: SCENE VIII Three Small Words www.thesims3.com/contentDetail.html?contentId=307869(same link in first post) I am always amazed at how quickly you and some others can get their updates finished. I'm pretty old, so maybe my creative juices just take longer to stew!
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Mar 11, 2011 10:45:03 GMT -5
Awwww. I couldn't think of a single valid reason for his treatment of Lana - except the icky version that he & Genet "had" something. You really pulled off a great one! I loved the insight, and I especially loved the last frame. Just so sweet.
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