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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 18, 2011 7:44:12 GMT -5
Yo, woman, what is it that I saw, I had to close the browser real quick. I'm at work, I'll have to read this when I get home  in the privacy of my room |
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Post by daijahv on Apr 18, 2011 7:46:00 GMT -5
HAHA sorry! I actually commented about this on the Krisis thread <3 I should warn people better  That's all thanks to the poses also! So many ideas I see looking at some of them. |
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Post by qui on Apr 18, 2011 12:30:18 GMT -5
I had to smile when I saw Brad with gifts but damn!
Ok let me go back to the beginning. I can't stress how much I love CJ's connection to his parents! No matter where they are he can alert the other when their is danger and I love that! It will only get better when he starts talking! The Savage twins have red eyes. Were they always red or are they in connection with Karver too? They know about the sexy fire thing so I can only assume that that's what it is.
Uncle Monty isn't playing huh? He's out for blood! Dude pissed me off talking about it's not their job to inform his witch!
LOL@CJ protecting Sarah! I can so see him having a crush on her! Ha!
Vincent isn't jealous? That would be nice if he was. serves him right to see what a good thing he missed out on. Brad Brad Brad. He really has it bad! Sad puppy.
Drake finally got a bite of cookie! Two bites!
My farewell will be needed soon? If that bitch is near, Zaiver can't be too far. |
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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 18, 2011 13:31:19 GMT -5
Wow, that was , I'm trying to find the right word, uh, steamy? LOL. I'm glad I read it when I got home. Seems being away from home has done some wonders for their sex life. The Savage twins got out? How in the hell did they pull off that one? I'm so glad Monty seems to be alive and well, but it sounds like he has a lot on his plate. Wonder what demon he's found. Or maybe it's Liliana. Yay, somehow that thought makes me so happy. I can't wait for her judgment day. Evil biatch! It's great seeing Brad again, he's so sweet with the flowers and the teddies. But Sarah doesn't seem to be pleased, in fact she looked downright annoyed. Poor Brad, you can send me those flowers and the teddies, skip the chocolate cos it triggers my migraines, but your fine self will do too  In fact I insist you must send me your fine self. And maybe Sarah will change her mind when she sees you're still in demand  Whew, did I sound as crazy as his stalkerish behavior is? But seriously though, I meant all of the above. For some reason I love Brad. I think he's nice. Or can be nice if given a chance. Every time I see Vincent I get annoyed! I didn't know Zoe can switch to bat form? Did you mention it before? I know Drake and Vincent can, I've seen them before, but Zoe, I can't say I remember. It was a beautiful sight to see though. Loved your sets. Very beautiful. |
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Post by daijahv on Apr 18, 2011 16:49:41 GMT -5
Qui:
LOL Bradley…just so very much in love and doesn’t know what to do!
CJ can never allow anyone to harm his Mommy. Though he has a deeper connection to Drake, it is sometimes hard to express himself but he gets his point across when needed and he will DEFINITELY only improve vocally.
Yes, they always had red eyes. The first baddies we met in “Desired” lol. Originally I’d intended to bring them back as recurring baddies, but got sidetracked with others and finally found a great way for them to return. They don’t have a connection to Karver other than they were created in his eyes…he is the father of all evil. They heard about Drake’s new abilities and decided to test the waters. (They’ll be back…again)
Uncle Monty (also making a return — I love him) is very upset about the rules and regulations with the Syndicate that tried to prevent him from helping his niece and nephew…he definitely wants to bathe in Lily’s blood. Betrayal after 200+ years, he won’t forgive. Marceau’s a thingy, no conscience or concern for anyone but himself and what money he can make or fame he can grab by being top dog of the Syndicate.
HAHA There you go again “Hello Mrs. Robinson” lol we know how these thoughts turn out
Vincent’s more protective…he still hates Brad and would prefer that he stay away from his daughter, but trying to fix his past harms to everyone he is trying to allow Sarah to choose who she wants to be with and not step on toes. BUT he will be happy for her if she finds her love in Brad.
Brad is the sad puppy…so sweet and loving and trying to make up for what he did. He truly loves Sarah and wants to give it a real go. Maybe there’s hope!
Drake did get his nookie haha twice (and still going)
Yes…alas it has come to the end for poor Zavier. But not before he and Lily see the inside of a dark and scary basement!
Freedom: Sorry about that! I will add NSFW notices for each chapter with the naked stuff I was thinking that they needed to add a little more heat to their bedroom fun…I got tired of the missionary stuff and with the new poses YAY it’s getting better. (But hopefully not too raunchy though, I’m just going to start writing and see how far I can go) And thanks to your finding that new set, I have a great pose for a scene in S8C1 YAY <3 thank you! I was thinking about how I would pull it off and now I know. Abigail was killed and she was the one that cast the bindings on their cell so many seasons ago. When Sarah killed her, it broke the binds and they got out (yep, been out ever since. This will be explained more in-depth later) Monty is hot on the trail of Lily and Zavier and is definitely not about to let them slip away. Since learning about Drake’s death, he’s been after them so you may get your judgment day very soon Brad is back and wanting his Sarah again! She is a bit annoyed, as you can see he is drowning her in gifts! HAHA she’s a little uneasy about forgiving and forgetting, though she agreed to dinner so she may be moving towards the healing process and is now ready to allow them to have a relationship. LOL you’ll take him if she won’t? He is very sorry for what he has done and just wants the chance to make it work. Aww what bothers you about him? I’m sorry to hear Vincent still annoys you! He’s stopped with the obsessive behavior and is trying the “just friends” things with Zoe AND repairing his relationship with Sarah. Yes, Zoe has always had bat form. When she was first turned she’d mentioned to Drake she wanted to learn, instead he made her run to the local store and do his shopping. BUT in Season 3 Chapter 7: A Simple Request, Drake and Vincent taught her the basics of flying and they flew to China to begin her trials to return to a human state. It drained her then and that was the first and last time they’d flown together so that’s why he wanted to be sure she could do it before they took off. Thank you! I take that as a HUGE compliment from you each time because I die whenever I see yours! Always so detailed and awesomely designed! I only fix rooms…never huge buildings but you always knock the designs out of the park! |
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Post by qui on Apr 18, 2011 17:33:59 GMT -5
CJ comes down the stairs, spots Sarah and runs back up. Returns shirtless. "Hey Sarah!"
Sarah: "Hi CJ!"
CJ: *looks around* "Where's Mom and Dad?"
Sarah: "Went hunting. I told them I'd wait here."
CJ "Oh yeah?" *rubs chin* "Wanna see a cool trick?" *sly smile crosses his lips and eyes turn red. Makes sofa vibrate underneath her and back cushions massage her back*
Sarah: "Ummmm, C-CJ?"
CJ: "Yes baby?"
LMAO! Sorry! I don't know why I see him being into older women! Excuse me, all women!
Oh my Zaiver. To bad you chose her. You should have come home to Momma and let me keep you busy!
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Post by jillyson on Apr 19, 2011 21:06:18 GMT -5
My Dark Vinnie being so nice by letting Brad live...how he's grown! I think CJ had it right, though! I was surprised that Sarah told Brad so much about CJ - he's part witch, that he'll be staying with them...etc. Information that shouldn't be thrown around too freely, let alone to someone who tried to kill her AND her baby, apologizes nonwithstanding. Roast, you sad panda!
Poor Zoe, someone's waiting around every corner for her and CJ lately. No wonder she's not in the mood! (at least until she remembered her mother's message, and it fit her own agenda! Good girl!) I love that she warned him about hurting her - and that he realizes there is a limit to what she'll put up with as far as his anger/violence is concerned.
Looks like they have an valuable ally in Uncle Monty, now that the gloves are off! Without the Syndicate rules to hold him back, we'll get to see what he can really do! Look out, Zavier and Lily...here they come!
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Post by daijahv on Apr 19, 2011 23:31:22 GMT -5
Lol Vincent is repairing his past hurts and it will need a lot healing where Sarah is concerned. He hurt her the most out of everyone so he is definitely trying to do right by her now. Sarah yeah...she wasn't too worried about sharing info with Brad, mostly because she still has feelings for him. Plus he was kind of stalking her, he would have been able to deduce that info himself. So you don't like Brad? Don't want him to be happy?  Zoe is definitely out for her and CJs safety now. She told Drake plan and simple, stop what you are doing or suffer the consequences and he backed down. He doesn't want her to make good on any threat. Hopefully Zoe's plan will pan out though! Uncle Monty will definitely offer his assistance where ever needed. I just feel that the Zavier/Lily thing won't deliver as I'd hoped...still working out the kinks though |
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Post by daijahv on Apr 21, 2011 6:51:43 GMT -5
4-21-11 -- Season 7: - Chapter 10 - RetributionWhile little is shown with Zav/Lils pain this chapter, I think I made up for it in the next...the exploration unexpectedly took more time. |
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Post by qui on Apr 21, 2011 10:28:51 GMT -5
I read this chapter with the most seriousness until I saw Zaiver! I just don't get it! Why my heart beats for him so. After everything he did to Zoe he deserves all the hell and pain coming his way but I still have this burning flame for him! *Sighs*
Zoe kicked her ass! That was really hot! It's nice to see her fight like that!
The fact that Zavier respond to Karver's named the way he did speaks volumes. I shook my head when he asked her if she was finally coming to give herself to him. So sexy and so greedy!
You ended on the best part! I love that Drake went for her heart! That bitch! I can't wait to see him do more to her! |
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Post by jillyson on Apr 21, 2011 12:40:33 GMT -5
This was awesome, and I hope she takes Uncle Morty's advice to heart - power corrupts. I have a feeling we're going to see that's become too true for our happy little family.
How was Zoe able to fight Lily so easily? Being such an old vamp, I would've thought Lily had the upper hand, since Zoe said she wasn't using magic on her.
SO glad Uncle's coming home with them - I look forward of seeing more of him!
I'm in a hurry (can you tell I'm rushing? - lunch is over & I'm trying to squeeze all my comments in - I loved how funny Drake was in this one. It was nice to see a little of the "old" Drake sneak in there.
I can't wait to see what Karver has in mind for the King & Queen of the Desert!
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Post by daijahv on Apr 21, 2011 20:38:52 GMT -5
Qui: HAHA Thanks for trying Qui lol Hopefully someone else **cough B.A.D. cough** can fill that void...or some other dark and handsome that may be on the way there's always one waiting somewhere lol. Zoe was definitely wanting to teach her a lesson! But Drake had to have the last "word". Right! Zavier and Lily BOTH reacting with such fear over Karver only shows what ruthlessness the man stores that we have YET to see. He is showing his good side...until he gets what he finally wants! He knows how to manipulate the game and he watched Zavier use brute force to get Zoe to do his biding so he chose another route...kill her with kindness, in a way. LOL Zavier doesn't know when to quit. He had plans but too bad they weren't seen through! Yep revenge is a bitch and he wanted to exact his the same as her. Jilly: Thank you! That won't be the only time she hears that warning...precursor for what's to come, if she doesn't heed them that is. Zoe was able to battle Lily because she had that extra help from Karver. You could even call it psychological warfare because the mere mention of his name sent chills down their spines, throwing her off her game. (Plus I got lazy after my story didn't send from work and I couldn't remember what I'd written...I was going to add more lol) Monty is the only blood family (aside from CJ) that Drake has kept in touch with and I thought it would be nice to see some of his family for a change. He will be around more as the "voice of reason" for when Zoe needs him. LOL no problem! I love how you always read these on your lunch breaks Karver will still keep part of what he intends to himself, but we'll get a nice preview of things to come. |
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Post by daijahv on Apr 24, 2011 1:48:10 GMT -5
NSFW (Not Safe For Work) I'm saying don't click this if you don't have a private office in your building...while I included adult content, it's not porn material...at least I don't think it is. Yeah just, use caution... I bet you're wondering why I haven't given you the link yet...yep...bah bah bah Just making sure you see what I said...that's all Because some people don't like to read or gloss over warnings...not saying any of you do it...but it happens... Yep! So how was your day? Alright, alright! Here: 4-24-11 -- Season 7: - Chapter 11 - HellfireEnjoy (And yes, I'm testing the waters...  ) |
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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 24, 2011 3:03:29 GMT -5
Wow. Just wow. I don't know where to start. So much happened in this.
Okay let's start at the beginning. Those two almost burned a hole in my screen. I swear I needed a very cold shower to cool off after that. I like his way of "tucking her in", I can get used to that. Zoe is a lucky girl. Love your use of the new poses. They look so seamless with your writing.
CJ's so adorable a toddler, I'm looking forward to seeing him as a teen, oh the hearts he'll break with all his charm.
I knew it would be too easy for them to walk away. Drake's really gone and done it now. Not sure which devil was better, Zavier or Karver. But then again, they are both devils, one evil can't be better than the other!
Lily and Zavier got what's been a long time coming and more. Can't believe they were unrepentant to the very end, and Lily...SMH, biatch got what she deserved.
Oh dear who are the evil monks? Poor CJ, bad monk is after him now. Oh no! Run Zoe, run, run with little CJ while you still have the time. |
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Post by jillyson on Apr 24, 2011 9:44:42 GMT -5
I must say, I was completely shocked to find those adult scenes - I sure wish you'd have put up some kind of warning! I mean, really Dai. You can't just spring that on people, ya know?  And to answer your question...yes, I think we can officially call this porn. So thank you for the best action I've had in years. I wonder the same thing, Daisies - will the new child be part demon, too, since Drake is technically now part demon? Hmmmm. Vincent is so great to Zoe. I'm glad she has someone she can trust with Drake being, "not himself" all the time. And If I had a child in danger, I can't think of anyone better than Vinny to keep him safe! And as for Brad, I can't think of anyone better to keep Sarah and Nessa safe than CJ! Lol! Keep an eye on him, buddy! Loved seeing Lily & Zavier get theirs, but it sure looked like, at the end, Zavier was trying to warn Drake. I was glad Drake finally sees what his return cost his family, and be better realize how lucky he is that Zoe didn't leave his ass for what he's done! He has a lot of making up to do, and while they had that hot and steamy sex, there were some undertones that make me wonder if next time, he might push those boundaries to a place where Zoe won't find it so exciting. And now they're faced with a new threat, who looked to have been waiting for Zoe to get rid of Zavier & return the stolen powers to their source. Was Zavier protecting Zoe and CJ somehow? Was that was he was trying to tell Drake at the end??? I was very surprised that Karver let her return the stolen powers - I assumed he wanted them for himself. Although I guess with the "perfect weapon" he's building out of poor CJ, I guess he doesn't need them. CJ - not only being part demon, but drinking demon blood every night? I'm very worried about him, and I only hope that the goodness he got from his mother's side will win out in the end. Having a daughter might take the edge off of the power at his disposal, but if she's a demon, too, will it be better or worse? |
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