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Post by daijahv on Mar 20, 2011 10:26:22 GMT -5
THANK YOU! The battle I hope did its job. I was still feeling “meh” about its action but I trust my readers the names I debated on Heckle/Jeckle and Moonlight/Midnight but giving them names giving them a lasting quality now! Sorry about Drake’s death. I did say in an earlier spoiler someone would die LOL but it wasn’t permanent <3 sorry for the panic. Oh yeah, CJ is definitely all powerful in the womb, when he comes out it becomes even more apparent! He has tricks neither of his parents will be prepared for. Vincent is absolutely going back to “coolest friend ever” status. He has already started the transformation. I could never remove him completely from the story that would kill me! his character brings too much to the story to kill off. Sarah won’t be gone for long, but I wanted to kind of show Vincent’s acceptance of her choices and explain why she was kinda of non-existent in the chapter. Sarah sadly is all that Zoe has, but next season I am bringing back more of the supporting characters in Maggie, Jasmine and Sam! With Sarah gone for just a few chapters I can concentrate on her relationship with her sister, Sam and Jasmine a little more. Thank you! I’m happy you enjoyed it!
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Post by qui on Mar 20, 2011 12:00:36 GMT -5
Whoa whoa whoa!!! A magic eater? You mean something like Zavier? She revealed herself? OMG that is freaking scary!! When you said she heard a voice that was unclear to her my heart sank! I used to read ghost and ouija board stories and I remember people saying if you heard that it was a demon or the devil. SCARY ISH man!! I wonder what this "someone" is going to do now that Zoe knows.
I wish Drake could just tell her and end the sneaking and questions.
Why is her mother not comfortable with a male heir?
Vincent's feelings were too strong...he'll be back!
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 20, 2011 13:53:51 GMT -5
YAY! *does banana dance* , the baby is Drakes. Suck that Vincent! Okay, I know that should have been last in my comment. But I couldn't wait to break into a celebration dance. Christopher is gorgeous. I bet he'll have daddy' good looks and charms. I'm so thrilled he's not Vincent's. The battle was as epic as I thought it would be. You never disappoint! And for that I'll exalt thee. Here's a karma point for you. For a second there I was scared Drake had died again. And I could almost taste Zoe's relief when he rose from the ashes. Somehow I still don't trust Vincent. But I suppose only time will tell. Awesome, awesome finale!
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Post by daijahv on Mar 20, 2011 14:07:16 GMT -5
Qui: Sort of like Zavier. He can collect powers and use them as Zavier can (and you may be able to guess why...if not, that's coming). And Zoe not listening to Drake has landed them in very hot water! She has exposed herself and her magics to the original evil that sparked Drake's deal and now he'll come after her.
Funny my Mom always told me NEVER answer your name the first time someone calls it because it could be the devil calling you and that's stuck with me...
(Side note: My BF just read that comment and was like "THAT'S WHY YOU DON'T ANSWER ME!" hahaha he has to call me at least 3x before I answer back, my Mom scared the crap out of me with that line!)
Drake really can't tell her. There is much he has no idea about and is playing off of what the person tells him right then and there. He also doesn't want her to panic and go ballistic because her powers do work on her emotions, he can't have her on edge the whole time and just start going crazy on people when she pleases.
Men are power hungry kinds of people by nature, her Mom believes that owning this type of power will corrupt him and their magic will be used for evil purposes. She has an overall distrust in male witches.
Vincent's emotions could very well return, but for now and for a while, he'll return to the cynical, sarcastic, woman chaser of the past we all fell in love with.
Val: The one thing I hate though is he doesn't have Drake's eyes really, he has Zoe's and her hair color SO he'll have contacts in the entire time I was so hoping for a blue eyed little boy. He has his lips though! And his bone structure. Funny about the "charm" thing, I wrote something along those lines in one of the chapters and Drake's enjoying his little "Casanova" while Zoe is frowning at him! YAY! Karma! <3 thank you I was almost ready to end the chapter on Drake's death but I thought that would be mean so I continued and added Season 7 Ch. 1 things to the end of this one instead. It actually worked better that way anyway. Hopefully Vincent will win you over he'll change his ways and mend the broken fences. He's already started down the right path with Drake and Sarah! Thank you!!
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 20, 2011 14:09:53 GMT -5
I got so excited I forgot to put it behind a spoiler. Sorry All fixed now
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Post by qui on Mar 20, 2011 14:20:47 GMT -5
This is going to be so wonderful!!! I can't wait for the next season now!! LOL That's so funny your bf read that comment!
Did I mention that during the fighting scenes I felt like I was watching a movie with surround sound and could hear the dramtic effects of bodies being slammed around? LOL
WHAT? Come after Zoe? For what? NOOOO! Baby CJ won't stand for that, will he? I love this Drake but the fact that something extremely evil is in his head and coming after his wife scares the sugar honey iced tea out of me!
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Post by daijahv on Mar 20, 2011 16:34:01 GMT -5
I'm hoping it doesn't scare people away. The content is about to get darker! Surround sound fighting? Awesome! I've toyed with the idea of making a chapter into an actual video instead of pics...but then quickly thought otherwise. That would take a lot of coordination. Who knows I may be able to pull it off....hmm actually I think I may try it! She is being nosy and since she wants in he'll show her what's inside. And unfortunately CJ is going to get his hands dirty really early The scarier the better. I am hoping to create a darker ambience this time around. The thing with Drake should help with that a lot. The damage of Zoe's disobedience and of Drake's deal with really begin to show soon.
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Post by sweetdreams25 on Mar 20, 2011 21:11:15 GMT -5
going out with a bang! they aint waste no time taking out the other vamps. sucks tho that they are basically being forced to kill their own kind, but you gotta do what ya gotta do. i am GLAD the baby is not vincents. he was working my nerves about all that. lets hope him moving on is the real deal. i can't remember if its been discussed before or if it was in the story and i over looked it, but was there a specific reason why zo's pregnancy was so short? is it because her baby has special powers? dag, i feel bad that zo doesn't have many friends to share this pregnancy with =\
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Post by daijahv on Mar 20, 2011 22:24:50 GMT -5
Thank you! Killing his own wasn't something Drake look forward to BUT with the number of vampires taken out during the war, he can smile for a specific reason: The more vampires that die, the weaker Zavier gets which will make his death all the more accessible for Drake when he finally catches up to him.
Nope not overlooked. Someone did ask why her belly popped so quickly. There is a reason behind the short pregnancy and that is to be revealed in Season 7. It does have to do with the baby's abilities but also a little something extra. Both Drake and Zoe were worried about the pregnancy, but for MUCH different reasons.
Having no one to look forward to sharing long talks with does really suck for her. So I am working on bringing more glee to her life in that aspect. Hopefully her sorrow will also be lessened by the joy of new baby as Drake mentioned. Though the baby brings with him some pretty not-so-happy moments!
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Post by holleyberry on Mar 21, 2011 11:47:04 GMT -5
Stop updating woman! I'm trying to catch up here! I am half way through the third season.
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Post by jillyson on Mar 21, 2011 12:16:20 GMT -5
Poor Holley - that's how I felt, but it's SO worth it to catch up. I'd forgotten about the Zavier aspect - that his power was based on the number of vampires!
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Post by daijahv on Mar 21, 2011 13:11:12 GMT -5
I'm sorry Holley! But we're at the end of Season 6 so there will be a small break between the next season That's the one thing that made it all ok for Drake. It'll be interesting to see Zavier vs Drake. A showdown to remember since they'll both have powers from the same source of magic.
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Post by holleyberry on Mar 21, 2011 13:17:38 GMT -5
Six! Argh! i thought there were only 5! *Reads Faster*
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Post by jillyson on Mar 22, 2011 19:33:53 GMT -5
Lol! Go Holley, GO!!!!
I hope it's a teeny tiny break!
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Post by daijahv on Mar 22, 2011 23:02:31 GMT -5
Just finished the storyboard for Chapter 1. Working on images for 2 now.
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