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Post by daijahv on Mar 18, 2011 10:12:57 GMT -5
Poor Vincent. No epic showdown planned as of yet mainly because Vincent's attitude and behaviors are changing. Perhaps he can sway you back, maybe not, but he should HOPEFULLY become his old self again.  |
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Post by valpre1983 on Mar 18, 2011 12:29:08 GMT -5
That's the thing. It's his "old self" I don't like. Never liked it. Never will  He doesn't know when to stop  |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Mar 18, 2011 12:40:17 GMT -5
 I caught up again,sorry for my lack of comments I will try from now on to leave some,I have been down,& I know it would show so kept my thoughts to myself,but know, I am still reading!Always!  ~ Boy!Oh boy! is B.A.D. hot,love the red glowy eyes!
~ But at the same time I am very worried for the unborn baby, I have a very bad feeling about it!
~ Also while on the subject,I hope the baby is Drakes,because Vincent will not allow his child to be out of his sight,if Nessa is anything to go by!
~ The war is awesome,I am glad the Crow got his revenge!
~ Can not wait for more,I love this story!(",)
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Post by sweetdreams25 on Mar 18, 2011 12:51:44 GMT -5
Am I crazy for starting to feel a little bad for Brad? o.O
Part of me thinks he really is sorry and wants to make things better with her. Or this could be part of your master plan and you're tricking me into feeling sorry for him!!!
Yes, the battle was epic. With TS3 being limited on that kind of stuff I think you pulled all that off really good. Glad to see that the ladies are safe...for the moment. I know there's bound to be more to come. |
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Post by daijahv on Mar 18, 2011 14:34:43 GMT -5
Val: It’s his old old self, not the one unable to control his emotions Aussie: Hey Chica! Welcome back! I’ve missed you and I hope you are feeling better! I’m happy to see you back on the forums Sweet:
Yes, I kind of want you to feel sorry for Brad that’s why I tried to make his story as a vampire as depressing as possible, eating filthy rats, living in filth, on the run from his friends and completely alone PLUS the rain lol I won’t shock you again with him but he had to be drudged through the mud before he could become a pretty flower! His hate blinded him for so long and so he has to be able to see the errors of his ways.
Thank you for the compliment. I am hoping the finally brings more of the same!
Note: I’ve added about 6 more pages on top of the 9 already written so this finale will be extremely long now! But I needed to show the brutality of the war…hopefully I did. |
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Post by qui on Mar 18, 2011 14:45:25 GMT -5
I liked that "old sly Vincent" but I hate the "my baby" comments! I want to throat chop him each time he makes one!
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Post by daijahv on Mar 18, 2011 15:32:31 GMT -5
That is the one that is coming back but the "my baby" comments well... > |
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Post by qui on Mar 18, 2011 15:57:19 GMT -5
then he shall prepare to get his throat karate chopped!
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Post by Aussie Karima on Mar 18, 2011 16:22:00 GMT -5
~ I think with Brad it is a case of walk in my shoes! to understand about Vampires,not all are bad & I think he is learning this the hard way, & a good way to teach the other hunters as well!
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Post by daijahv on Mar 18, 2011 16:30:23 GMT -5
It's a great learning experience for him and I am happy that he is going through it JUST so he can be that once in a lifetime love for Sarah who desperately needs a little sunshine in her life. |
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Post by jillyson on Mar 18, 2011 19:45:45 GMT -5
Kind of like Vinny is for me!
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Post by daijahv on Mar 19, 2011 21:51:26 GMT -5
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Post by qui on Mar 20, 2011 0:22:40 GMT -5
Whoa! ACTION!
HELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL YEAH! Baby Drake!! Those blue eyes are beautiful! Now, I am very very curious!! What kind of powers does Christopher have being a vampire/warlock? Drake knows something about the baby and it's killing me that he won't say anything! I have to admit that I was a little pissed when Zoe did the spell after he asked her not to but I do understand. I'm glad Vincent has done what he has done but with Jasmine being so young and still learning, will that spell wear off?
Zoe's mom seems to think they're having more kids.
I think I'd always be pregnant if I had a man that could do that sexy fire thing! OMG my heart sank when I thought he'd died again!
I sure hope there isn't a demon inside of Drake because I love him like this and don't want him to change!
Way to take the season out with a bang! I shall dream of the sexy fire thing all night! |
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Post by daijahv on Mar 20, 2011 0:45:55 GMT -5
The baby has Drake’s eyes, literally! I photo shopped them from his picture JUST to 100% verify that child’s Daddy. Baby Christopher had powers in the womb and now we’ll get to start seeing his little contribution to the Steele/Vale clan. Zoe will come to realize he did in fact kill that vampire to protect her and he’d been doing similar things all along. BUT his birth was a bit premature/abnormal because of Drake and his deal. Drake knows tons about his Son. He first knew he was having a boy and knew that he would be a magic eater also. He warned Zoe against casting because CJ has a talent (to be revealed) that has irreparable damage to witches. Zoe had to know, Drake refused to talk to her and it was getting on her nerves. She played the abiding wife and that got her nowhere. The spell she cast was bad in a few ways. She revealed the truth from his head to hers BUT also revealed herself to whomever Drake made his deal with! Jasmine is still learning her craft, but the empath thing was something she was born with, though she just discovered the ability it’s a little more ingrained than the witchcraft stuff. It does have the possibility of wearing off but we are all safer now that animal lust Vincent has been tamed. Funny, you picked up on that. Mom wants more children MANY more! She is hoping to have a granddaughter, one that can take the powers if/when Zoe passes. She isn’t comfortable with a male heir and tried to express that without coming right out and saying it. LOL @ Always pregnant  Sorry about the Drake death thing…I had to throw the Phoenix story back in there somehow though. It’s how we get to see the consequences of Drake’s use of the fire. Not only that, the more he uses it, the deeper in debt he gets with his deal maker. Nothing is free! There’s not a demon really in Drake, but that’ll be cleared up with the coming chapters. It’s more like a guiding hand. Thank you! As you know this chapter took all day and I felt like crap after it was done haha but I am glad you enjoyed it |
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Post by jillyson on Mar 20, 2011 9:33:26 GMT -5
This was freaking AWESOME!!!!
Loved the battle, loved by Vinny loving the battle, loved B*A*D burning bright in battle! The crows rock, and I love that they have names now.
I almost died when I thought Drake died again!
CJ saving mom - and he's a majic eater? Can't wait to see what that's about!
I'm glad Vinny is getting help for the extreme emotions Zavier put in his head. I'd miss him too much if he had to leave all together, and hopefully this will put him back in his old role as coolest friend ever.
It's a shame Sarah moved away, as she really is all Zoe has friend-wise. That was so sad that she had no one to give her a baby shower! I hope that changes for her.
A fablous ending to a fabulous season!
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