Creation to Future (updated 2-14-11)

[holleyberry]

Chapter Three is Up!

[jillyson]

Awesome, Holley! I gave it 5 stars. Your writing is really good - you've got a heck of a story going there! I absolutely love it!

[Tina ☺]

Great work Holley! It's cool how you built up all the suspense surrounding the storm.

[holleyberry]

Thanks guys! I am glad you liked it ;D

[gldkelly]

You are very talented! GREAT Job!
More Please!!!!!!!!!

[joandsarah]

SPOILER: Click to show

"The bugs don't bug me so much."

I think I'de be more worried about the bugs then the fish.

"Adam where are you putting that fish?"

[/quote] Maybe we don't want to know.

I think fishing is about as fun as watching paint dry

>cough< no mirrors >cough<[/spoiler]

Interesting plot going there with Ivah and the storm...which is now left on a cliff hanger!

Good job Holley.

EDIT by Tina: Hey Jo, somehow your spoiler tags were broken so I've edited hoping to fix them...

[holleyberry]

I didn't have a mirror Jo! Where did you see a mirror?

There goes Lynda already asking for more ALREADY ;D

Tina I thought the pictures turned out great don't you?

[joandsarah]

I thought it was I will have to look again, it was after Ivah turned teen.

I can not get that spoiler thing to work.

[holleyberry]

There was no mirror
Do you mean the frame where she is in her "cave person" clothes? I don't have doors on the shelter there are only archways, maybe that's what you saw and thought was a mirror.

[Aussie Karima]

;)As you know I think it was brilliant, & Tina did good with the storm affects,but Jo what spoiler? Telly Tubbies!AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH! Sorry had to change the chanel! sorry!

Which mirror? were?

[joandsarah]

There is a spoiler button here. When you post details about a persons story or your own story that not everyone may want to see, say a picture of a baby turned toddler, some may want to wait for the chapter to come out, so you can hide it behind a spolier. people have to click on it then to see it.

[holleyberry]

Thanks Again Karima ;D
I think Jo was seeing the arch way. It kinda looks like a mirror.

[Aussie Karima]

:'(No mirrors & I can't get the spoiler button to work!

[Tina ☺]

Feb 21, 2009 20:58:05 GMT -5 joandsarah said:

I thought it was I will have to look again, it was after Ivah turned teen.

I can not get that spoiler thing to work.

I think it may have been because of the quote tags that were there for some reason. I removed them and it's working now.

The pics did turn out nicely, Holley! ;D

Hey Karima... in order to make the spoiler button work, you have to highlight all the text you want in it and then click the button. You text has to be between two spoiler tags that look like this without the spaces:

SPOILER: Click to show

Your text goes here.

[joandsarah]

Thanks for fixing that Tina, I did them twice, so maybe I forgot to highlight or something.