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Post by qui on Jan 22, 2011 19:44:25 GMT -5
OMG that chick is sick! He became aroused and she turned him into a rat! What a horrible death and what a horrible woman to have in Tristan's life! I feel for him! This history with her and the future if he can't get away...  |
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Post by sb on Jan 22, 2011 21:03:33 GMT -5
I love it! Sick yeah....but really really good!!
I hope you get used to Blogger. I've been using it for 5 years, and it took a while to figure it out. The headers in particular can be tricky to set up.
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Post by valpre1983 on Jan 23, 2011 4:51:12 GMT -5
Wow, I don't know how I missed this. It seems the apple doesn't fall too far from the tree; Bridget's inherited Enid's powerful hate for men.
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Post by Aussie Karima on Jan 23, 2011 5:22:32 GMT -5
 Oh,my gosh!  ~ Please forgive me I thought I left a comment here!Sorry Holley! ~ I must say first I am loving the bigger clearer,pictures on Blogger! ~ I think she is taking after her mum,nasty personality & all, in fact I think,because of her beginning in life, & what her father did to her,she is actually worse than her new mum!(I thought gee she looks like Angel?  ) ~ Tristan, actually bore the brunt of both of these females, I am amazed he turns out to be a very nice person in the end!(after hearing his back story!) ~ But that is the very reason he hates his mother so much! ~ I wonder what his mother has planed with that love potion? ??
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Post by joandsarah on Jan 23, 2011 6:38:34 GMT -5
I finally feel clear headed enough to comment. I love the bit with the love potion. No that doesn't sound like it would make anyone fall in love lol. You know my best bits are always those that make me laugh. If any funny is there you know I'll find it!
Karima I notice has a sharp eye! ^ Angel doesn't look at all herself and I wonder if anyone else will spot that she is Bridget.
Now I can see why you warned me about how Angel would be. Her character here is more horrible then I thought, but It doesn't bother me, because she's not playing herself.
Lots of heavy stuff in here. I can see how her horrible life and having Enid for a mother warped her mind, but even so she is an adult and responsible for what she does. I'm not one much for the plea "My bad life made me do it!"
It's a wonder Tristan turned out as well adjusted as he is.
Hope to see the main family next time, I want to see what Meadows baby looks like!
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Post by jillyson on Jan 23, 2011 8:48:51 GMT -5
OMG!
I thought Enid was bad - Bridget is a PSYCHO!!!! The pictures are amazing - it must've taken you forever to pose those!
It was really great to see the back story and find out a little more about all three of them. How Tristan came out with any compassion at all is a miracle, and it's easy to see now why he struggles with self-worth.
That potion is going to be serious trouble if it's to have someone from the Creation house fall in love with Bridget so they'll spy for her and Enid! Just the idea of a Creation becoming the next "pet" gives me goosebumps! Great writing and plotting!
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 23, 2011 12:44:43 GMT -5
Qui: Thanks for reading. Yeah, Bridget really is a character. What with her childhood and then being raised by Enid she does have some "issues"  sb: Yay a new reader! I am glads you thought it was good! Val: It's a lesson she learned well. I'm glad you liked the pictures...I try. Karima: Enid and Bridget sure do make a pair. Now you know why Tristan doesn't care if he lives of dies. Good eye spotting Angel. Jo let me use her. Of course she's a bit different in my story Jo: First off Thank You, Thank you for letting me have Angel. I didn't know what I wanted to do with her initially, but she has been very fun to develop.
I would say she's had more than just a "bad" life, and she hasn't had anyone to tell her differently. It's not an excuse, but a reason.
You do get to see the baby next chapter, so look out for that. Jill: Thank you so much for your support and proofing. I am getting a bit used to the pose boxes and OMPS now, so it doesn't take as long anymore. For everyone commenting about how Tristan came out unscarred, or with a bit of humanity i just want to remind you he had a "roll model" for lack of a better word. He's already known love with Cordelia and she showed him there were other ways then just what he knew with his Mom. |
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Post by amylu1988 on Jan 25, 2011 6:41:15 GMT -5
I read it!  Good to know more about Tristan's background, but blimey the family have got some evil to contend with, let's hope they can deal with it! And I agree with Val, some wonderful shots in this, it looks just as amazing as it is to read. Brilliant, Holley. |
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 25, 2011 13:10:15 GMT -5
Thanks for taking the time to read Amylu! i know you've been super busy with real life. Yeah, the Creation family sure has a lot to look forward to from Tristan's family for sure. Glad you liked the pictures. I try |
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Post by joandsarah on Jan 25, 2011 16:29:59 GMT -5
Still wondering if anyone but Karima caught on or wondered who the sim playing Bridget is...
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Post by holleyberry on Jan 26, 2011 18:48:56 GMT -5
No one else has mentioned it Jo. I do know Jill knows. Karima is just super observant. I don't think many people would put those two together that way.
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Post by holleyberry on Feb 1, 2011 12:07:06 GMT -5
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Post by valpre1983 on Feb 1, 2011 12:08:39 GMT -5
Ah...Tristan and Ivan will be making a whole lot of fires, I see.
It was great to see Adam discipline Seth, hope he gets his attitude straight soon, it would be such a shame if he went through life thinking everyone hates him when in fact they're trying to better him. But then again, he's a young man, teenage angst and all.
I think it will Tristan a while to adjust to being part of a healthy family unit, hopefully he won't be the only teacher, and the Creations will teach him how to be human, and trust and love again. Loved the update Holley. |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Feb 1, 2011 12:55:57 GMT -5
~ I don't know how long Tristan can fight the very obverse attraction,but he must to get things done & then leave to keep them safe from his mother!
~ I do feel sorry for Tristan,I also wish he would tell Adam his thoughts on were he thinks his daughters gift comes from!
~ Loved that first shot,& good to see it finally in this story!lol!
~ Thanks Holley for this,this Challenge
is such a good read!
~ I loved it BTW!(",)
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Post by jillyson on Feb 1, 2011 13:33:46 GMT -5
I just love to see these two together! His whole face lights up whenever she's around - how is that even possible???
I loved his reaction when he got his first dose of actual mothering - as it SHOULD be done. The fact that he pulled it together so quickly and realized what was behind it just reminds us of how far he's come from his black roots and what a good man he is in his heart.
I think my favorite part was Adam saying "Behave!" and Tristan thinking it was him being warned, then Adam says, "I was talking to her!" Lol! Too cute!
Seth...so much jealousy and anger in his young mind. I hope he doesn't let it poison his mind to Tristan.
Great insights to the characters this chapter - everyone from Adam and Eve to Seth and Tristan. You really let us into their heads and hearts. As usual, I loved it to pieces!
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