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Post by holleyberry on Mar 11, 2009 20:04:06 GMT -5
It doesn't matter to me which you do. i would like to see you mention it here though
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Post by jillyson on Mar 11, 2009 20:11:15 GMT -5
Too short! But AWESOME! I especially like the last shot, but hey, that's just me... Such drama! I can't wait to see what comes next!
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Post by holleyberry on Mar 11, 2009 20:16:23 GMT -5
Um... would you mind expanding on the "AWESOME" for me ;D questions I am concerned about How was the romance, was it too much? Was I a bit too graphic?How about the werewolf part, was that good? Did the pictures look good?
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Post by jillyson on Mar 11, 2009 20:23:57 GMT -5
Good, no, no, good, yes, and yes! Lol! (Sorry, I couldn't help myself!) I was glad to see Caine "grow up" and be responsible for Meadow. And even though I knew a little about what you had planned, I still didn't see that twist coming! I really liked that - but you know I'm a fan of that stuff ,so no surprise there! I like that you made it happen to her dad. That opens up a lot of interesting possibilities. The romantic scenes between Meadow & Caine were really valid - I think they acted like any teenagers in love would. Very serious, and in the vein that they were going to be married so young, it seemed very right. The pics were awesome - very well done, and realistic.
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Post by holleyberry on Mar 11, 2009 20:52:39 GMT -5
Oh Jill I LOVE YOU! Thanks for the great comments I dragged out of you I'm glad you liked the part with her Dad. I told Jo it was spur of the moment, and it was! Originally I was going to just have him die Now he's a place holder until i can figure out what to do next I really tried to keep the scenes between Caine and Meadow PG-13, cause the stuff I read in real life sure isn't ;D
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 11, 2009 23:05:14 GMT -5
Hey Holley, it's after midnight here and I JUST now got my story uploaded and ready for the readers so... I haven't read this yet, but I am SO looking forward to reading it over my morning coffee. ;D By the time you wake in the morning, I will have it read and commented upon.
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Post by holleyberry on Mar 12, 2009 0:50:42 GMT -5
By the time you wake in the morning, I will have it read and commented upon. OK. I will probably be logging on about 8 AM or so. I'm looking forward to see what you think. ;D
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 12, 2009 9:12:10 GMT -5
I loved it! Wow... getting all plotty and stuff on us, aren't ya? Plotty as well as mysterious.... I, as usual, spotted a few grammar abnormalities, but other than that, you did an awesome job! Also, way to go on making us wonder what will happen next!
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Post by holleyberry on Mar 12, 2009 12:05:26 GMT -5
Thanks Tina! I am glad you liked it. Still some grammar stuff I swear I read the thing 10 times before I uploaded it I think I am going to have to break down and write it in Works. Meadow can't hear "god" yet, so I had to write this one a bit different. I think I am going to mix it up in future chapters depending on the Plot of the chapter. Yeah I am now the queen for the Cliff hanger ;D Your pictures looked good in the story don't you think? I don't think it would have been as good without them. Thanks Again!
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 12, 2009 12:32:38 GMT -5
Oh yea... the pics did look good. I just LOVE editing pics! ;D Thanks, I'm glad you liked them. You got to and too mixed up a few times. I can't remember what else right now, but you did a really good job of it as a whole. If you are the Queen of the cliffhanger, I must be the Master!
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Post by holleyberry on Mar 12, 2009 12:40:34 GMT -5
I'll go back and read with fresher eyes. And Yes Tina you are the Master
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Post by jillyson on Mar 12, 2009 13:12:26 GMT -5
So when will the next one be ready??? (no pressure here, huh?) I'm so excited to see where this is going! I bow to the Queen and the Master of cliffhangers - you've both got me dying for the next chapter! Lol!
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Post by holleyberry on Mar 12, 2009 16:19:53 GMT -5
I actually am taking some pictures today. It's all in my head and wants out now My poor DH and kids are sure going to miss me
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Post by Aussie Karima on Mar 19, 2009 22:46:41 GMT -5
:-*Well! well! well! ;)I finaly, read it all! my PC decided to leave me with a cliff hanger, dying as Meadow was just about to be attacted by a black wolf(sorry but if you have not already read it,that is all you will get out of me!)fantastic! I also loved the awesome photo editing, & after the cliff hanger my PC gave me! I was very happy to finaly read it all,albet a week after I started to read it!Five big fat shiny gold stars! Also, a very good job done by Tina! with the pics.
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Post by holleyberry on Mar 19, 2009 22:53:52 GMT -5
Thanks Karima! I bet that sucked your computer dying at that part. I would be like... Of course that's just me
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