The Mobacy Ch 19 (updated 3rd January)

[valpre1983]

Yay, I'm all caught up

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Loved the toddler spam, Jo. The kids are all so cute, and I like the different personalities you're giving them.

Poor Ashley, living with a witch can't be fun. LOL when I saw he'd grown a tail. Ouch

I loved the whole update, your dialogue is always so witty and funny. Wish I could do funny and witty as well as you do

[joandsarah]

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Thanks for reading Val. I only just noticed you had left a comment. I'm so bad at noticing updates or comments it seems.

Ashley has certainly had a long punishment and it's not about to get any better for him.

[joandsarah]

Update! Nic's Interlude. 'Bite Me' joandsarah.livejournal.com/66204.html

[amylu1988]

;D Left you a comment over at bp Jo, as you saw. Awesome chapter.

[joandsarah]

Thank you Amy, your comment and Lorin's makes me very happy. Makes me feel like starting the next one!

[joandsarah]

Bump joandsarah.livejournal.com/73722.html ;D

[Pixx]

...Sitting here trying to figure out if i read that chapter....

[joandsarah]

Which one Pixx? The one I just put out? Take a look, I think you would remember it if you have.

[jillyson]

How fun to see a new mobacy update! Squee!!

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Before I forget, I just want to say it was very inspired of you to write in "RL" tragedies like the death of Chiara and Luigi's dementia. I know this is a light-hearted dramedy, but these touches really make the story "truthful" yet don't take away from the general tone.

OK, *checks notes
Rosa - such a shy little sweetie! I love how she and daddy have a special bond. I love how he looks after her and calls her Honey Bee.

Also - those little fairy-type pop-ups placed throughout the story are just adorable!

It was a very clever plot point to not erase or replace Chiara, but to write her death into the story. It gives you a lot to bring to Amber, seeing her struggle with her fears of losing Mo, too. I'm glad Alissa has taken her under her wing - she's really going to need her!

Poor Joanne, dealing with Luigi's worsening issues without any support. I'm glad Sal is going to step up and take a hand in getting his dad some help. It looks like he also might be tapped to step up as heir earlier than he planned on, unless one of the brothers fills the role. A power struggle?

He still had enough of his mind left to thwart a bombing at the wedding! (And he looks great holding that gun! Lol!) It was fun to get a glimpse of the old Luigi there! A Mobacy-quality whack!

Lottie's wedding hair and dress - she really is a lot like her aunt Angel - they march to their own drummer. I've always liked Lottie & it was nice to see Brandon join the family, even if he wondered if that was a good idea! Lol!

Lol @ Tamara's pregnancy dreams! A vet, horse tranqs, kittens and teddies! I think I'd have run right back out the door after showing up for the real delivery & seeing the same people in the lobby! That was a great segment! But the nurse coming for Sal - CLIFFHANGER! ARGH!!!

The Nic-Spam was adorable! Little Mario is TOTALLY worth closing the game 8 times for! What a doll! (his sis is a cutie, but the little guy sure takes after his daddy!)

What a great chapter! I really, really enjoyed it!

[joandsarah]

Jilly! *tackle hug*

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I miss talking with you. I wasn't sure if you would be around to see this chapter or not, so I'm really happy that you are and as usual you notice or comment on some things different from anybody else.


Firstly the word dramedy, I like that! You're right it has moved more from full out comedy to dramedy, but it will be light hearted over all.

Everyone has said something positive over including Chiara which is a relief to me. I was worried beforehand someone might be offended. Yes Alisa has taken her under her wing which is a very Alisa thing to do.

Rosa is a complex character, given her stats, her hobby and her rolled aspiration (which I am keeping under wraps for now ) But yes a very shy daddy’s girl.

You are the only person to mention the fairies. Glad you liked them. I forgot to set the parks season to spring until half way through shooting, I figured it wasn't outside of my tone to add a bit of whimsy to the 'fix' I also couldn't resist the bee as it looked like Alisa had grown feelers from that park toy behind her head.

bombing at the wedding *thinks* You mean at the main house Jilly, that was on Sunday after the wedding. I don't know if you noticed, but I added what day it was at the top of the page. That was all game play shots. That bar tender arrived every day and wouldn't leave and I couldn't fire him! I struck him with lightening the day before, but he still came back.... (lol reminds me of that song “The Cat Came back’) what's a mob boss going to do? Blow him away! Luigi looked to have fun.

I had fun with her dream scene. I figured by about the time the horse syringe was introduced that people might figure it was a dream.

Isn't he just! Looks very much like Nic, although I'm sure he will end up with more of a nose than him.

Cliff hanger! I'm already working on the next chapter, so while it won't be up for awhile it won’t be 11 months like that other time.

Thanks Jilly. ;D *hugs*

[jillyson]

Lol! Sorry I messed up the order - I was taking notes on a paper and ran out of room, so I started squeezing things in anywhere!

I was just thinking about Nic's interlude & how much I wanted to see an update!
*Flying tackle hugs back

[joandsarah]

Well guess what? There's another update! ;D joandsarah.livejournal.com/

[amylu1988]

Left you a comment on boolprop Jo, great chapter! ;D

[Dez PhoenixphyreAu]

Finally caught up kindve...just finished lmao at frozen sim me in the hier challenge...classic stuff. Man I miss that sim, am trying to figure out if there is a way I can make up a TS3 simself and host it on boxnet like i did with my Ts2 simself but will go ask the help forum for that in a moment.

Am off to read chap 17 now...can't wait!!!

[joandsarah]

Thanks for reading Dez. ;D