The Mobacy Ch 19 (updated 3rd January)

[holleyberry]

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You know, I thought that might be the reason when I was reading it, especially when Elle came out to stop him, but I wasn't sure. Than when the last dance happened I got it. I was commenting as I read, so that's why I forgot to go back and fix it.

[joandsarah]

Amylu: I left you a long comment back over on BP.

Karima:

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Thank you for your lovely comment, they always make me smile. ;D

Val:

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Glad you liked it and found some parts funny. I was aiming for a balance. Best house I've ever built, thanks to an Italian floor plan and a tutorial on building an attached garage!
Thanks. ;D

Holley:

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Oh I do that too, read and comment some times. Hope I cleared up who Graham is, but I will explain more when I put up the picspam.

Thanks for reading guys! ;D

[jillyson]

Wow, Jo! This had everything!

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So many funny parts! I started this on my lunch break, but didn't get to finish. I was dying to get home & see what happened, and you didn't dissapoint!

The wedding (s?) was hilarious, and Angel is always entertaining! I'd forgotten all about Graham - I wonder what he's doing back in town? And clever how the zombies snagged a ride with him!

I'm so glad that the elders got to see the baby bump before their final dance. A beautiful goodbye, perfectly done!

[joandsarah]

Jilly, I should have replied back -my bad. Thank you for your lovely comment.


I come bearing gifts! of the update variety.

Chapter 18 Baby and Toddlers
joandsarah.livejournal.com/45861.html

[Aussie Karima]

The babies & toddlers were adorable!
~ I loved it Jo,how about Al, he was there every night, I guess he misses them all!You made me LOL at his comments!
~ A stinky nappy song,now I have heard everything!(first I heard of it!lol!)
~ Great update Jo!

[holleyberry]

Great Update Jo!

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Well, let me get the obvious out of the way *Squee* Nicoli!
Nice to see Al again. Even if it is in ghost form. So nice of him to check up, i.e. scare, his family.
Oh no! Poor Benardo. So sad for him, but really funny! Glitches sometimes work out great for funny, huh?
OMG! I LOVE that cat outfit you have on Ashley. I can't wait to see what Plan B is!
Love the babies and toddlers! The scene with Tamara and Alisa! It was well writen, I thought, and a great way to show different parenting styles.
I Love who you picked for Tony! I bet they make cute little babies too!

[jillyson]

OMG - there was so much great stuff in here! I tried to take notes, but there's just so much that was great!

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First of all, I noticed more description in your writing - I love the way you described baby Rosa especially!

Pushing the baby thru your plumbob was hysterical, and I love Joanne's new hair! (She's such a good nonna!)

The ghost of AL in that meeting was absolutely fabulous! Bernardo becoming a monk - totally left field - the bee glitch was perfect!

I loved the Austin Powers joke, and Phoebe at Uni was outstanding.

JCUSL - members: HER! Lol!

Nic's "Blah off" was great, and April is gorgeous - with her make-over, she's breath-taking! Tony's a lucky sim!

Rosa is such a charmer - this gen's "Lottie", I think! All the babies are so adorable, and the missing toddler drama during the mom fight was too cute. "I think it's some kind of rhyme.." Lol!

Good luck on getting a son, Sal and Tamara! I love how he dodged the "exploration" option!

I can't wait to see if Ashley gets cured, or Purred!

And what party would be complete without the "bringer of the wet blanket!"

Great job, Jo! I can't believe how much you squeezed in there!

[joandsarah]

Thanks so much for your comments guys. I will reply to you both more in depth later. I'm really not feeling so great today. I woke up kind of dizzy. But both comments much appreciated.

Karima: You may need it for my loooong reply back.

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I'm replying to your longer LJ comment here.

I had to include Nic in there some place, especially after I used one of his sexy calender pics on the cover!

Thanks, I was pleasantly surprised how it looked. I still want to know how to place things as cut outs and actually to know what the heck I'm doing as I do it!

I'm so glad it still had laughs. I'm trying to go with a bit more of an overall story feel, but I have to keep some laughs in there or it wouldn't be me. Overly serious just isn't my bag.

I must go play Phebe some more, I only played half her rotation. Except half the time the stupid gypsy date doesn't work. They get dropped and no date meter shows. *grumble*

I'll have a close up of Adriano in the picspam to come. Somehow he got that frecked skin. I've never figured it out what makes it suddenly appear. He is cute.

Poor Ashley plan B isn't too pleasant. But then we need to remember who he was as Ashley Pitts and realize he brought it all on himself.

I threatened Tony with either Melissa Fancy or scoping out guys. It worked!

I'm going to jam that thinking cap on her head and get her to exercise as often as possible. She has only just gained her fifth body point after coming with four.

Luigi has become a bit senile I think. He now rolls this little wants and annoyingly wants to take the babies and toddlers out of cots and feed them. He also takes the lift down to the basement to go back up to his bedroom! I think Salvatore needs to take over soon!

Free will arguing between those two so I had to use it. Alisa has 9 nice points so she can't be that difficult to talk too.

Thanks so much for that long Comment Karima. I always love knowing how those small details went down.

Holley: I did you a reply back on BP.

Jilly:

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Thank you for that great comment; it always helps me knowing what I am doing right. I am trying to be a bit more descriptive, but not overly too much as I still want it to be a fast read with plenty of laughs along the way.

Your the first person to mention Joanne's hair. I thought it looked really nice too.
She really is a terrific grandma. :)Salvatore and Tamara roll no baby or toddler wants at all, but Joanne had wants to teach to talk and nursery rhyme. She was friends with Rosa as a baby before Tamara was.
I guess I should have said that 'Nonna and Nonna mean grandmother and grandfather in Italian, but hopefully you all guessed that. I also learnt that it is Papà with an accent, and not just not Papa which means Pope! I noticed I left one off.

I like my left fields. Keep you on your toes.

Well she is very different to Lottie, Lottie is outgoing and Rosa is so shy! Both the toddlers are sweeties though.

Let’s hope so, even I don't know yet.

[holleyberry]

I saw it! It's no problem to comment over there since I just cut and paste

[joandsarah]

It's good though, particularly if you paste it there say a day or so later as it bumps my thread up. Just it is such a huge board with hundreds of legacies that even a new posting from a few days back can get literally buried with new ones. So a nice little bump never hurts.

[amylu1988]

Commented over at boolprop, needless to say I loved the chapter as always, Jo.

[joandsarah]

Thanks Amylu, I replied back.

[Tina ☺]

Yay! So, I am now all caught up on this story! ;D Crapola, I forgot to reply at LJ, but... I'm not surprised as tired as I am getting.

Anyhow... love it as usual, Jo! Your stories are always good for a laugh or two, and this one is no exception. Can't wait to find out what Angel is going to do to poor Ashely next and what other adventures the Mobacy clan will get into next time!

[valpre1983]

I thought I was way behind on this, but it turns out I just have two chapters to catch up on. LJ is still acting funny Will read it later though

[joandsarah]

Thanks again for catching up Tina, you are doing a terrific job on catching up on everyone’s stories. I replied to you a couple of times over on LJ, but you may not have noticed those.

Val, I don't update my legacy very often. Mostly because of the staged photos. ~procrastination. Now it's on hiatus until I can sort this cc crashing problem I have.

I did do Rolley's BC ~Which Holley won. ;D (You probably haven't seen my OWBCThat stands for 'Officially Wacky Boolprop Challenge') Holley won three pregnancies on eight commands or as Tina puts it 'she gets to grow old and croak it' It doesn't seem to crash when I stay on the home lot, but businesses are dicey or community lots, they have a habit of suddenly crashing. And I need to play my legacy or my OWBC business lots to be able to shoot another chapter. So I put them both on hiatus.