Loz
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Post by Loz on Feb 16, 2011 19:19:59 GMT -5
Apologies for double posting, but I've updated with chapter 2 However, I'm really sorry that the quality of the writing gets a bit sucky towards the end; I had to do a lot of work on this one due to being over-ambitious with regards to what I thought I could fit in, and as a result I kind of lost my patience with it. I hope it's not too bad though and that you enjoy it!
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Feb 17, 2011 19:23:23 GMT -5
The link says it's been removed.  |
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Loz
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Post by Loz on Feb 17, 2011 19:51:16 GMT -5
Ooops... I removed it because someone on boolprop told me the text was all over the place, so I took it down, fixed it and then re-posted it and re-linked it... I just forgot to put the new link up here  Sorry, I'll sort it out now. EDIT: It should be fixed now  |
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Feb 17, 2011 22:21:01 GMT -5
Wow - that was a big one! So much happened in there!
I was so happy to see Jsse felt the same about Evie, and how wonderfully their lives have turned out. And Gabby - I never thought she'd end up living that life. How sad for her and her little girl, but they're better off without him!
And Zara, keeping her little "friendship" secret - too cute!
I can't wait to see the next chapter in all of their lives!
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Post by Aussie Karima on Feb 18, 2011 0:06:20 GMT -5
 ~ Wow! The mini story was great in that we catch-up with this lot & how different their lives are in such a short space of time,I loved the wedding, & then the baby,or should I say two,it is a pity that their lives are now running at a total opposite to each other(except for Zara,that is!)Loved it & will wait patiently for more!(",)
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Loz
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Post by Loz on Feb 18, 2011 10:07:55 GMT -5
Jilly: Aww, I'm so glad you were happy for Jesse and Evie I really wanted people to love them as much as I do Yep, Gabby and her baby aren't having the best time of things lately, but Gabby's strong and she'll be okay And like you say, it's better for them to not be around Taylor right now. Hee hee; I really wanted to explore what Zara's thinking right now but I didn't have time  Basically, she doesn't want to admit that her and Vance are so close but she can't exactly ignore it either, and Vance is just grinning on the sidelines and waiting for her to wake up and feel the love Thanks for the comment and hopefully I'll be reasonably quick with chapter 3! AussieKarima: Aww, so glad you liked everything! It is a shame that Evie's got a perfect life and Gabby hasn't, but at the same time it's nice to have a contrast. And then there's Zara, pretty much doing her own thing in the background Thank you for being patient; you may need to be as I'm not known for my quick updating skills! But I'll try to get the next chapter out really soon |
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Feb 18, 2011 13:31:08 GMT -5
I did find it funny that Zara was the one who had to point it out to Jesse, and couldn't believe how dense he was about being in love, and she's doing the exact same thing! Lol!
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Loz
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Post by Loz on Feb 18, 2011 13:53:53 GMT -5
:lol: I wondered if anyone had noticed about Zara and Jesse Bless her; she's so perceptive when it comes to her friends but she hasn't got a clue about her own feelings |
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Post by jillyson on Feb 18, 2011 19:58:16 GMT -5
That was a quiet little nuance, bu it was one of my favorite parts!
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