Loz
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Post by Loz on Aug 31, 2010 21:06:38 GMT -5
Hello there This thread is for my brand new story, The Reason Is You. The story follows 5 friends as they go through life at university and beyond. Please give it a read and (hopefully) more will be explained to you. Without further ado, I present The Reason is You PrologueChapter 1-- EvieNEW!! Chapter 2-- GabriellaPLease post your thoughts and comments; constructive criticism is always welcome! Hope you enjoy it and thanks once again for reading
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Post by valpre1983 on Sept 1, 2010 9:58:32 GMT -5
I tried reading this, but the font's too small for me and I had to strain my eyes. I couldn't even maximise the screen. So perhaps if you can add a zoom feature or something on the slideshow I'll try again
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Loz
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Post by Loz on Sept 1, 2010 10:36:17 GMT -5
I'm really sorry; I've just checked it and realised you can't click full screen cos for some reason it just zooms in one part of the page... I don't know how to fix it though; can anyone help?
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Post by valpre1983 on Sept 1, 2010 10:39:59 GMT -5
I think Amylu or Jo can help with this since they use Slideshare
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Loz
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Post by Loz on Sept 1, 2010 10:54:19 GMT -5
Okay, thank you I think Amylu's online tomorrow, so hopefully she'll be able to help me then.
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Post by valpre1983 on Sept 1, 2010 11:02:23 GMT -5
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Post by Loz on Sept 1, 2010 11:12:18 GMT -5
Thanks, but I've figured out how to get it fullscreen now If you hover the mouse in the bottom left hand corner, the 'view fullscreen' button should pop up and if you click on it, it works fine. Hope it works for you too!
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Post by valpre1983 on Sept 1, 2010 11:20:11 GMT -5
Nah, I tried hovering, nothing comes up *Edit* It finally worked after I don't know how many tries. Great start. I enjoyed learning more about Evie and her friends
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Loz
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Post by Loz on Sept 1, 2010 11:33:27 GMT -5
Thank you! Glad it worked for you eventually; I don't know why it's being such a pain in the neck.
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Post by amylu1988 on Sept 1, 2010 13:39:31 GMT -5
I had to click on the title itself to take me to your slideshare page, it worked from there. Comment tomorrow, promise!
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Loz
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Post by Loz on Sept 1, 2010 15:26:46 GMT -5
Ah, okay Thank you! xxx
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Post by amylu1988 on Sept 2, 2010 6:13:23 GMT -5
Decided to keep my comments to you on boolprop, edited my post over there. Great stuff Loz, now get working on chapter 1!
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Post by Loz on Sept 2, 2010 10:34:07 GMT -5
Thank you dear And yes, if anyone who wants to comment has profiles on boolprop, then please post your comments on my thread there; it's much easier. Thanks!
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Post by jillyson on Sept 3, 2010 21:37:43 GMT -5
I don't belong to boolProp, but I did leave a comment on LJ for you, and I'll copy it here as well: This is a great start! Your writing is wonderful, and your characters are already quite developed! I can't wait to see where life takes our little group!
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Loz
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Post by Loz on Sept 4, 2010 14:51:30 GMT -5
Thank you so much, Jilly! I forget to check my LJ, so I didn't see your comment; thank you for reposting it. EDIT: I just posted some extra stuff up on LJ for you to have a look at before I post the first chapter; hope you like it! You can find it here: elladiabola.livejournal.com/
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