danasaur(:
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Post by danasaur(: on Jun 27, 2010 19:31:50 GMT -5
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AHH i LOVEE this story SOO MUCHHH <33333333
AHHHH. 8DDD
cant wait for fourr !!!!! <33333333333333333333333333333333333333333
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Post by valpre1983 on Jun 28, 2010 2:11:02 GMT -5
Can't wait to see more of Alfy and his sexy Sorry Pixx, no Alfy this time, but it's still read worthy  Wow Dana, I didn't even know you were following this. I'm glad you like it so much. Well Karima's already hard at work on Chapter Four |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Jun 28, 2010 2:41:50 GMT -5
~ I'm working!.......I'm working!  ~ Thanks Dana,I had no idea you were reading! So, thank you!  ~ Sorry, Pixx, but I will get him too you soon!  |
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Jun 28, 2010 12:04:22 GMT -5
Wow!!!
I can't remember, do we know who Amanda's Ex is? It seems that someone else now knows about the secret love children Storm's dad fathered. I noticed the information in the files was not just accessed, but tampered with. That's going to produce some interesting results, I bet!
I love how Toria is taking care of Starr & appreciating that special time they have together while he's little, and that she realizes Storm will regret missing it. I sure hope Storm realizes it before it's too late!
I'm glad Kendra isn't going to push Toria out of her life and realized it was just her own tension causing the thoughts of jealousy. I sure hope things work out for her and she gets a baby of her own!
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Post by Aussie Karima on Jun 28, 2010 12:49:41 GMT -5
 Do we know who Amanda's EX is?  ? Maybe! maybe, not,.............maybe, the next chapter could clear that up for you! I said, MAYBE! lol!
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Post by Pixx on Jun 28, 2010 20:22:28 GMT -5
I'm just seeing this! Off to read...Sucks that there's no Alfy in this one though.
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Ack! The pictures aren't loading, my internet connection is a bit whopped today...
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joandsarah
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Post by joandsarah on Jul 1, 2010 1:52:37 GMT -5
Great chapter karima and Val. Silly Amanda just leaving her tag lying around! Sounds like a can of worms is about to open up! Loved the start, the middle and the end. ;D |
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Post by ning on Jul 4, 2010 5:05:16 GMT -5
Omg YES! Everything loaded for me!  Will leave a comment on blogger, or do you prefer to receive comments here? EDIT: I came back to check for updates and decided to do the quiz: b, c, b, c, b. I didn't cheat at all! ^^ Hope I got everything correct, haha, or that would mean my memory is failing me.  |
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Post by holleyberry on Jul 14, 2010 15:59:54 GMT -5
Argh! I know i'm behind on this. Does anyone know what chapter I read last |
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Post by Pixx on Jul 14, 2010 16:28:33 GMT -5
Look for your last post, that'll probably help (take it from someone who's always behind on her reading ;D )
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Post by Aussie Karima on Jul 16, 2010 23:48:20 GMT -5
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Tina ☺
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Post by Tina ☺ on Jul 17, 2010 7:42:59 GMT -5
I just read chapter one... very intriguing so far! I was going to move on to chapter two, but the site stopped working for me for some reason, so I'm going to have to try again another time. You guys are doing a great job. Keep up the good work!  |
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Jul 17, 2010 11:16:13 GMT -5
You don't have to thank me, I'm a poor substitute for Tina, but glad to step in and help out. This chapter was really great! How funny, I never even suspected that Alfy was the ex! Perfectly played! Clearly, he hasn't actually looked at the files that he copied yet - won't he be in for a shock! I wonder if those files will keep his "dark side" fed, or if the love of Charrise will make him want to be a better man? Poor Kendra. It's great to see her dh standing strong for her, so they can get thru this hard time together. I hope the IVF works for them - I bet she'd make a great mom! I wonder if the clerk messed up her and Dean's file? If so, for better, or worse? Will we get to see the fashion show? I wonder who else will be there, and if their meeting will cause something to happen? That black and white photo with the umbrella showing red was PURE ART!!!! You two have given the characters such depth, we really feel their pain, ambition, and sense of not belonging. High drama at it's best! |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Jul 17, 2010 15:59:44 GMT -5
;D Wow Jill,way to make me blush(I can't say for Val,but I know she will too!) Jilly~ I'm so glad that we surprised you with that,maybe it could explain a thing or two about his ex! ~ Ning,we love to get a comment on blogger & here,but either one will do! (or both* Wink!wink!*)  |
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Post by valpre1983 on Jul 18, 2010 2:34:03 GMT -5
Aww Jill, I just saw your comment now and you are no poor substitute I'm just glad you and Tina haven't started charging for your services. I was really hoping someone would mention the possibility of the temp messing up the files ;D and I'm glad you picked it up but whether or not she did, I can't say To have the pic done that way was Karima's idea and pure genious. But I can't take all the credit for it since DH also helped with the photoshopping but I'm glad you think it's art and it turned out okay ;D |
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