Romance vs Relics The Adventures of Nellie Blye

[Sawyer]

Tina! You looked down there! *takes bow* Did you explore the cavern fully? That place is HUGE.

So, NeLLie's in there with her ex, eh? That was a twist.
I'll look back in a little while, because I'm sure you're about to post the next segment.

[Tina ☺]

LOL! Well, he's not exactly her 'ex' because they never really made it 'official'. They have just run into a road block is all in their relationship, which may or may not be overcome. Besides, she was daydreaming, you know. You'll have to wait and see whether I explored it fully or not.

The next segment will probably be up tomorrow sometime. It's organized and ready to go, but I haven't written it yet.

[holleyberry]

I FINALLY had time to sit down and read this thing.
I really like Nellie, the unlikely explorer.
I figured you would try to explore her relationship with Zhan Su at first. He is a cutie too.
I think Ho Sung is a jerk to take her to bed without letting her know he's married. Serves him right if she leaves him in the dust.

Gear mini-Story going on Tina. Can't wait to see more.

[Tina ☺]

Thanks Holley, I'm glad you like it! Although it seems it's turning into a bit more than a mini story...lol.

Nellie has really grown on me too. Her clumsy nature is rather endearing the way she's always stumbling over nothing and then looks around, embarrassed, to see if anyone noticed...lol! I was, actually, going to have her persue a relationship with Zhan Su at first, until I got a good a Ho Sung and saw how hot he is. Bummer that he turned out to be married, but that's just a small obstacle in this game.

I'm working on the next part right now. ;D

[Harley]

OK ..I will read tommorrow..now I'm off to bed...

[Tina ☺]

Ya lazy bum!

[Sawyer]

It's getting good! *rubs hands together* ANOTHER CLIFFENDER?
Tina! You're killing us!
So, where were those other passageways that the rocks opened up?

[joandsarah]

I'm all caught up. Those gnomes are creepy! And just how many caves, holes etc are there?! They sure put a lot into it. So is she still perusing Ho Sung?

[Tina ☺]

LOL... the passagways were just all through there, Sawyer. I showed them in the pics. I can't describe exactly where each one was because my memory isn't that good and I've played WAY further ahead than these pics show.

Jo, I can't reveal the answer to your question because it would spoil the story. You'll just have to wait and see what happens between Ho Sung and Nellie as the story progresses. To answer your other question: There are LOTS of tombs/passages/traps, etc in this game. Mostly here you've seen only the ones in China. Nellie has two more regions to fully explore.

And thanks y'all! I'm glad you're enjoying the read. ;D

[Aussie Karima]

Wow, you are cranking these out, I love it, (as a bonus most of the pics showed up!) So I read it a lot faster than most of these,but enjoyed it,just the same as the previous CH! Thanks TINA!

[amylu1988]

I love those gnomes, especially because they move and have such funny poses!

I really am enjoying this Tina, the pics being bigger really makes it feel like a window into the game and Nellie's a great character, I can't wait to see what happens with her and Ho Sung; I thought that was him at the door not Jack Bunch!

[jillyson]

I love those gnomes! I have these 2, plus the French one. (he looks like Napoleon). There were more in France in the Art Gallery, but they wouldn't let me pick them up - only kick or rename. One looked like a mime and one I think was an artist, with a beret. So far, it's just my little Chinese one that moves around the lot and visits the others.

It looks like Nellie is getting really far with her explorations! I can't wait to see the next chapter! She's so endearing with the clumsiness and her cute expressions.

[Tina ☺]

Hey everyone, thanks for reading! I'm totally thrilled to see that y'all are enjoying reading this! ;D

I HAVE to pump them out quickly, Karima, before I forget what happened...lol. This totally different from completely creating a story from scratch and setting up scenes on purpose like I did with my other stories...lol This one is more like doing a challenge or a legacy. Folks who write those and take a bunch of pics of things happening in the game know what it's like to forget what happened when,etc and then be able to make it into a story.

[joandsarah]

This totally different from completely creating a story from scratch and setting up scenes on purpose like I did with my other stories...lol This one is more like doing a challenge or a legacy. Folks who write those and take a bunch of pics of things happening in the game know what it's like to forget what happened when,etc and then be able to make it into a story

Yep. Which is why I take notes as I go (which is a pain) not just to have to write them but when I lose them! I lost all my WYDC and OWBC notes! At the time I'm sure I knew why I took those photos. *sigh* Now I am doing both. Some are just taken in play and a few are set up.

Off to read, I will edit this after woulds.

Edit: A Potion of Remembrance, dang I could do with some of that! Couldn't be any worse then the healthy stuff I have for breakfast. urk.
It must take up a lot of time befriending all these people. I'm Interested to see what challenges this place holds.

[holleyberry]

I'm having some issues with the pictures loading for Episode 10 for some reason. I'll keep trying.


Edit:
I restarted my computer and they came up just fine.
Great update! I am anxious to see what the plaque says!