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Post by joandsarah on Feb 28, 2010 7:07:23 GMT -5
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Post by Aussie Karima on Feb 28, 2010 8:32:54 GMT -5
 Read it! And totally loved it! ~ Did Collette ring Ho Sung?or was it Zhan, being so close to all involved with Nellie, & figuring it all out? & giving Ho Sung the heads-up!?
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Post by Tina ☺ on Feb 28, 2010 8:36:12 GMT -5
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Post by jillyson on Feb 28, 2010 9:48:38 GMT -5
WoW!!!! This is heading in an awesome direction now!!!!
I love Youssef's approach. Good or bad, he's a proper gentleman. I don't think he'll be Nellie's choice, but he's a good yardstick for her to measure just how far outside the lines our Freaky friend Gustave is!
I love her next quest - how appropriate! I hope she discovers what's in her heart while she's on it!
And it's great to see Ho Sung finally getting off his butt and DO something for Nellie! I hope he's in time!
Great build-up, and I can't wait to see the next chapter!!! Fabulous job, Tina! |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Feb 28, 2010 11:05:16 GMT -5
Thanks, Jill! You are, in particular I think, going to LOVE the next chapter!  |
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Post by valpre1983 on Feb 28, 2010 15:07:39 GMT -5
Oh man, oh man. If that whole scene with Gustav and Collette was meant to scare me off him, it might just have worked. I have a bad feeling about this one and I sure hope Gustav is not BAD baddie. I knew he was a wee bit crazy, but now I'm starting to worry. This is not good...not good at all.
Ho Sung's finally growing a pair! Nice. Wonder what that phone call was about. Can't wait for chapter nineteen. |
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Post by joandsarah on Feb 28, 2010 15:56:35 GMT -5
I never noticed, but then I don't have WA or play sims 3 much, so my brain probably said 'They can sit while talking on the phone' moved on and forgot it! What other 3 were photoshopped? Yes you are very good! Gustav, thanks for spelling it there Val.  I think he's a wife beater who killed his previous wife! That's my theory at the moment anyway. |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Feb 28, 2010 17:06:59 GMT -5
 My opinion precisely, from the very beginning,there was subtle hints!I think he is a possessive wife basher, that has killed, previously, & is the secret his COUSIN Collette keeps!
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Post by Tina ☺ on Feb 28, 2010 17:33:13 GMT -5
@the wife beater theory! Aww, poor Val.  This chapter wasn't done on purpose to turn you off of Gustav. The story is merely progressing as I have intended all along. It is NOT easy, but like I said before, I am not letting anyone's theories, opinions, projections, or team preferences sway me from the storyline that is in my head.  lol
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Post by holleyberry on Feb 28, 2010 17:33:50 GMT -5
Oh! New update *off to read*
Where the heck have I been?!
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Post by Tina ☺ on Feb 28, 2010 17:37:52 GMT -5
Hope you enjoy it Holley!
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Post by Aussie Karima on Feb 28, 2010 17:55:07 GMT -5
;D Well,Gustave................having hanky-panky, in the hay, with his cousin, would put anyone off of him, as THAT is crazy! |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Feb 28, 2010 18:03:42 GMT -5
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Post by holleyberry on Feb 28, 2010 22:20:55 GMT -5
Argh! That room with the door puzzle was the WORST! I think that took me forever to get by. Anyways, moving on... Ditto to what Shadie said about the "kissing cousins" *ewww* And I wonder if perhaps Gustav has a violent history w/ concerns to women. I hope Nellie stays safe.
*Squee* Yousseff kissing Nellie. He does seem like a gentlemen, but I am also skeptical of him. What exactly happened to the Relic Merchant?
Can't wait to hear So Hung's story! What could possible justify his actions?
Can't wait to read more Tina! |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Feb 28, 2010 23:14:53 GMT -5
LOL! I actually cheated on that second one. It pissed me off, so I teleported Nellie past it. I probably would not have cheated had it not been for my story. I just wanted to be able to get the screen shots so I could continue forward with it. Anyway.. thanks for reading, Holley! I'm glad you enjoyed it. ;D You are another one who, I believe will really enjoy the next chapter. It is a bit more light-hearted and fun than the previous one, and it is sort of a respite before  in the chapter after.  |
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