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Post by Sarie on Jan 4, 2010 4:31:34 GMT -5
Well the Intro at least.  www.thesims3.com/contentDetail.html?contentId=153786 Young Jen O'Neal is a striving photographer, trying desperately to make a name for herself in the business. Her fiance Drake loves her more than anything, and would do anything for her. But what will happen when what she loves breaks her? |
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Tina ☺
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Post by Tina ☺ on Jan 4, 2010 7:42:29 GMT -5
Very nice, Sarie. It's great to see more writing from you!  |
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Post by Sarie on Jan 4, 2010 10:26:19 GMT -5
;D
Even though it's real bad?
Thanks Tina!
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Post by Tina ☺ on Jan 4, 2010 10:30:25 GMT -5
LOL! Hey, it's not bad at all! Although, you could have hired me for my proof reading services. I did notice a few of your usual grammar mistakes, but it wasn't too bad. I think you're improving!  I enjoyed the story a lot and would love to see more. |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Jan 28, 2010 14:25:53 GMT -5
I can't believe no one else has noticed this?   |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Jan 28, 2010 16:42:07 GMT -5
;D Sarie, I love this story, are you going to finish it, I would have commented on Sims3, but at the time there was no way I could,with the messages not working!Sorry it took me so long to reply, I did not know you had a thread here for it!More please!  |
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Post by danasaur(: on Feb 1, 2010 17:57:45 GMT -5
OHEMGEEZZZ.
that was so beautifully written, Sarieee!!! 8DDDDD
loved ittt. moreee. i need moreeeeee. XDD
cant wait for the next part if there is a next part!! xx
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Tina ☺
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Post by Tina ☺ on Feb 1, 2010 19:19:29 GMT -5
Yeah, Sarie, come and post with us more and .... write! ;D
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Post by jillyson on Feb 1, 2010 19:48:44 GMT -5
You can't leave us hanging, Sarie!!! How did the fire start??? WHY did the fire start??? More!!!
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Post by seaweedy on Jan 18, 2011 17:15:29 GMT -5
I am glad I found this site and your story, I look forward to more.
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Post by joandsarah on Mar 20, 2011 17:02:07 GMT -5
All I get is Oh well.
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 21, 2011 20:24:04 GMT -5
Oh well, Jo... this story was, unfortunately, abandoned over a year ago. Or at least she never posted us anymore links to it if she continued. |
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