medleymisty
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Post by medleymisty on Jun 30, 2009 16:49:15 GMT -5
I honestly don't know if I should call this a legacy anymore. The prologue is turning into a rather complex and slowly developing story. But I figure I'll focus on the next update and not worry about the future. Speaking of the next update - I had a totally epic vision of it on the way home and I'm getting straight to work on it after dinner. In the Valley of the Sun Sunset Valley is a small coastal town famed for its sunny beaches, down home hospitality, and rich history. Or at least that’s what the brochures down at the Chamber of Commerce say. The inhabitants know that the glossy pictures of happy families swimming and tanning and playing volleyball are as fake as the smile of a father who got yet another ugly tie for Father’s Day. The real Sunset Valley, the rotted wood beneath the gilding, is the home of many ghosts. |
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Post by Pixx on Jun 30, 2009 17:31:09 GMT -5
Ooooo...nice. I'm gonna go read it now
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Post by Tina ☺ on Jun 30, 2009 21:33:46 GMT -5
Wow, your description makes this sound very interesting! As soon as I get caught up on a few other stories, I'm definitely going to give this a go!  |
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Post by Pixx on Jun 30, 2009 23:04:04 GMT -5
It is pretty story like but I love it. Nice...except for the cliff hanger, they upset me ;D
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Post by Tina ☺ on Jun 30, 2009 23:48:42 GMT -5
Misty, I could not resist taking a peek before going to bed, so I read 'The Beginning'. Wow! I am very intrigue just by that little bit. Great job! I also left a little comment on your page.  Pixx, I'm going to get busy reading some more of yours in the morning. Shame on me for getting so far behind!  |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Jul 1, 2009 3:18:56 GMT -5
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Post by Pixx on Jul 1, 2009 9:14:06 GMT -5
Woot!Is there gonna be a new chapter soon?
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Post by jillyson on Jul 1, 2009 12:24:29 GMT -5
I'm hooked! MORE MORE MORE!!!! (Jilly loves her some ghosties!)
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medleymisty
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Post by medleymisty on Jul 1, 2009 23:37:17 GMT -5
Yeah, I don't know - I think the legacy thing might be false advertising at this point. Pixx - Thank you! And there's a new chapter up now. And it doesn't even end on a cliffhanger really, so no worries about that. Tina - I feel flattered. I'm glad you found my little teaser interesting - I didn't plan it all and it just happened when I sat down to write the first bit, but it does seem to be drawing people in. jillyson - I'm happy that you like it. Although there won't be more ghosts for quite some time. But we're getting there. Slowly and joyfully. |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Jul 2, 2009 0:10:32 GMT -5
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Post by Pixx on Jul 2, 2009 12:08:44 GMT -5
Yay, new chapter!!!
OOOO, nice. Can I call that the Ice cream chapter? Now I want ice cream lol
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medleymisty
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Post by medleymisty on Jul 6, 2009 0:21:00 GMT -5
aussie and Pixx - Thank you so much for your comments! And sure, you can call it the ice cream chapter if you want. |
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WOW I love the tension in the new CH 'Sunset' great update,MORE PLEASE!