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Post by catmania80 on Feb 18, 2010 13:39:21 GMT -5
Val, Unforgettable will always be "Unforgettable" for me! I absolutely loved this story from beginning to end and I too am so sad to see it end. I love the way you took out Jade and saved Victoria and that Storm was the one to do it. Also loved the way he held her and comforted her after Jade was dead and Victoria was falling apart. The suspense of waiting to see if Victoria was shot or not was absolutely killing me until I turned the page. It really touched me! I can't wait to see the baby either! I know you read the comment I left you on your site and yes I'm back at DD. You did an awesome job to borrow a phrase from Tina and you definately deserve high praise for this story as it was Totally Riveting and kept me in suspense wondering what was going to happen next! I will miss this Story so much!   Sorry this post is so late! |
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Post by valpre1983 on Feb 19, 2010 1:20:17 GMT -5
Awww, Robin. Thanks so much for reading the final chapter. I'm glad you're back here and everything's fine. I think I'll miss drooling over Storm more than anything else  LOL Don't worry about posting late. I know you haven't been feeling too good. |
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Post by valpre1983 on Feb 21, 2010 9:18:13 GMT -5
I come bearing the Epilogue: www.publishorperish.co.za/?p=1368Ladies, this is the last time you see Storm in action, unless of course you have your HOTNESS calender ;D |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Feb 22, 2010 7:27:55 GMT -5
OK, so I commented at your site. Great job, Val! Now.... hurry up and write us something else!   |
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Post by holleyberry on Feb 22, 2010 10:08:02 GMT -5
Great to see Starr!
It’s always a little sad to come to the end of a story you love. I’m glad Storm and Victoria, as well as little Starr, are finally able to just be.
Thanks Val for sharing this wonderful story with everyone.Hopefully you show us a little PicSpam of the growing family later.
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Post by valpre1983 on Feb 22, 2010 10:42:09 GMT -5
Thanks Holley and Tina ;D I just saw both your comments now. @ Holley, I'll def post some pics of the growing Starr but we all know what he'll look like when he's older And Tina, no writing for a while. I'm a woman of leisure now ;D which means more time for me reading others' stories |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Feb 22, 2010 11:09:28 GMT -5
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Post by Aussie Karima on Feb 22, 2010 11:20:59 GMT -5
;D Thanks Tina! I thought I had done something very wrong after reading the story, as I got an error message that the thread no longer existed on trying to post a reply! OK..............Val,what can I say, I will miss it all (I have to get back to you with a proper reply! I'm too sad at the moment!) |
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Post by valpre1983 on Feb 22, 2010 12:03:53 GMT -5
 Karima. Hope this makes you feel better. I saw your comment on my site and I feel ya pain
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Post by jillyson on Feb 22, 2010 13:29:20 GMT -5
I totally missed this! I can't get the last chapter to work, but the epilogue works fine, so I had to check it out!!! What a wonderful surprise for me to find while I'm eating my lunch at work! I'm just going to copy/paste my comments over from your site, not because I'm lazy (which I am) but because every word is the truth!
Val, What a beautiful ending to a beautiful story! I bet you feel like you just gave birth yourself - relieved, a little sad, but looking forward to the future!
You've taken us all on this thrill-ride for so long, I don't know how to fill the void! Hopefully, you'll write us another new, exciting adventure. I'll be the first to sign up for the ride of a lifetime!
And you thanking me for the priviledge of enjoying your story is unneccesary. Thank YOU for this Unforgettable gift!
*I still have to go back and read the last chapter - it's the only one that won't show up for me!!!
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Post by valpre1983 on Feb 23, 2010 1:01:39 GMT -5
Hey Jill, Hope Chapter Nineteen opens soon and you're able to read it. And thanks so much for your awesome praise. I'm glad you all thought it was great from start to finish  Now I have too much time on my hands so get cracking on Niall and Heather |
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Post by jillyson on Feb 23, 2010 19:18:20 GMT -5
Just finished it! It was just awesome. And yes, I'm working on my fav werewolf & his lady love as soon as I finish my dinner!
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Post by joandsarah on Feb 24, 2010 18:47:23 GMT -5
I finished!  I am so glad I got to read it all through without having to wait on chapters too! Beautiful weddings and a very nail biting ending! Now I want to see their baby as a toddler! |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Feb 24, 2010 22:26:58 GMT -5
I told Val folks would be begging for toddlers photos! ;D I would like to see some myself.
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Post by valpre1983 on Feb 25, 2010 2:53:21 GMT -5
@ Tina & Jo, there I was thinking I was done with Sims 2 now you want photos Will this ever end ?  BUT I'll see what I can do, as soon as I get a chance to open my game. I haven't opened it in a wee while and I just don't have the energy for it right now  |
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