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Post by maegnas on Nov 21, 2008 23:40:04 GMT -5
hehe cool you'll probably be my first reader. anyway I'm taking off. I am tired. see ya tomorrow and good evening!
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 22, 2008 8:25:48 GMT -5
I commented at LJ too!  Wow girl... this story is amazing so far! So much raw emotion shines through beautifully. I can't wait to see what will happen next. You also did a nice job with the grammar except for mishaps here and there. Like I've said before, I'd be more than happy to proof read for you if you want to make sure it's even better before posting. Great job! Now... hurry up with chapter three Woman!  |
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Post by maegnas on Nov 22, 2008 9:13:16 GMT -5
I'll take your offer I think and next time send it to you forst just in case I am very glad you liked it. If everything goes as planned and I finished my work today I will work on chapter 3. going to read your comment now |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 22, 2008 9:19:49 GMT -5
LOL! Well my comment there is close to same as here, just shorter I think. It really REALLY is good though! You really do have a knack for making the reader 'feel' the story. That is part of what makes a good writer. It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside when people have said that about my writing. I think that if you can feel the story while writing it and you make what is happening clear to the reader, then chances are they can 'feel' it too. You do very well with that!  |
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Post by maegnas on Nov 22, 2008 11:57:17 GMT -5
thanks you. I'm glad to know people can feel my characters emotions. You are right when you say a good writer is able to let people feel what they want them to. Thanks again for the good comment I hope I'll be able to continue to make you feel what they feel |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 22, 2008 12:00:18 GMT -5
I'm sure you will. I think that maybe it's a talent that comes naturally. |
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Post by maegnas on Nov 22, 2008 12:05:48 GMT -5
I think it is. I read some people's stuff and it wasn't good because there was something missing. I'm sure if someone else wrote it with them it would have been better. But these people must have talents in something else.
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 22, 2008 12:10:59 GMT -5
Yea, you really do have to get a 'feel' for your story. You have to put yourself into it and actually become your characters. I really have to be in the mood to write so that I can do that. Sometimes if your mind is on other things, it's impossible to jump into a story the way you need to in order to make have depth and that 'wow' factor...lol (there's another word I wanted to use, but it went right out of my feeble head...lol)
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Post by maegnas on Nov 22, 2008 12:14:52 GMT -5
my problem (or gift maybe?) is that I am usually obsessed with the story. I feel it in my head. And it's like that until it is over. Sometimes it's only a part of the story but sometimes it's the entire thing. This time it's the entire thing. We will see...
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 22, 2008 12:19:18 GMT -5
I know exactly what you mean! I'm usually like that with mine too. Once part of a storyline gets into my head, I'm not happy at all and it's all I think about until I get it written down. It IS an obsession!
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Post by maegnas on Nov 22, 2008 12:26:46 GMT -5
yes it is. I woke up the other day dreaming about my twop main characters hehehe
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Post by maegnas on Nov 23, 2008 10:12:15 GMT -5
chapter 3 is posted. thanks again for the correction! |
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Post by Sarie on Nov 26, 2008 13:42:39 GMT -5
I remember posting here a long long time ago!
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Post by maegnas on Nov 26, 2008 19:31:54 GMT -5
possible I lose track of you I talk to hehe everything goes so fast around here I can't keep up really
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 26, 2008 23:17:55 GMT -5
I'm sorry Mae. It has taken forever to get back in here and post my thoughts on this story. Well here they are... I LOVED IT! ;D It was very intense and moving. I could actually feel the characters pain and confusion and was on the edge of my seat waiting to see how it would turn out. Awesome job! People... I HIGHLY recommend diving into this one! |
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