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Post by maegnas on Oct 24, 2008 22:59:48 GMT -5
I don't have much free time but I have a lot of time to think  So I thought about that story and was able to write it down in 30 minutes (luckily I type real fast ) It was supposed to be a sim story but because I have no time to shoot it well it's only in word format for now. Anyway if you are interested you can find it here : maegnas55.livejournal.com/621.htmlI don't want to say much about it because it would break the punch. All I will say is : it's a kind of fantasy/mystery story. Anyway feel free to leave your comments  EDIT : I uploaded chapter two and 3 on livejournal for those who are interested. Here is the link : maegnas55.livejournal.com/ |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Oct 24, 2008 23:02:52 GMT -5
I'm so stupid! LOL Nevermind the pm I sent, I know which story now... doh! Cool, thanks for posting the link! I will read it in the morning with my coffee while my brain is fresh!  People... I highly recommend reading this. It's really good! |
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Post by maegnas on Oct 24, 2008 23:05:51 GMT -5
haha too late I already answered back hehe and it's okay anyway I think I'm going to bed now. I can't see my screen anymore because I yawn too much LOL |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Oct 25, 2008 12:55:02 GMT -5
Awesome Story Mae! It very much intrigues me so far! I had a bit of trouble reading the tiny print on your live journal page though, so I copied it into word to read it. Well, the proof reader inside me jumped out and I corrected some of the grammatical errors while I was at it...  lol Anyway, I have posted the revised version below if you want to check it out... You may copy and paste it eithe into your first post or your live journal page if you want it and I'll delete it from my post... Being posted on this thread may also help others who can barely see the tiny print on your live journal page... EDITED to remove story from post. Check it out on the live journal link above... |
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Post by maegnas on Oct 25, 2008 13:02:25 GMT -5
thank you for correcting it and posting it there. I'll change the fint if I can on my livejournal page I didn't notice it was that small hehe |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Oct 25, 2008 13:04:34 GMT -5
Yea I struggled with it for a while and then asked myself why when I could just copy it stick it someplace with larger print...lol! Anyway, let me know when you have it, and I'll delete the story from my post...
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Post by maegnas on Oct 25, 2008 13:15:31 GMT -5
okay done. I saved the thing in word just in case hehe |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Oct 25, 2008 13:26:32 GMT -5
Awesome! It looks MUCH better now! I have really good eyesight and knew it was pretty darned small print when I was struggling to see it! |
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Post by jillyson on Oct 25, 2008 14:39:23 GMT -5
Hi Mae! I loved your story! And after seeing "Meet Joe Black", I feel certain I could learn to love Death, too! (old Brad Pitt film where he played Death) Nicely done! |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Oct 25, 2008 14:46:26 GMT -5
OMG, Jilly! *fans self* I could definitely love death if he looked like that too!  hehe... I thought it was cute how he loved peanut butter on a spoon! |
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Post by maegnas on Oct 25, 2008 21:22:36 GMT -5
oh yeah?? I didn't know that... I have never seen that movie ... oh that makes me see my story from a different point of view now ... silly me thought it was original hehe ... ah well ... guess nothing is purely original after all but anyway thanks for the comment and BTW I love your avatar jillyson!!!!!!!!! I love a nightmare before christmas hehe |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Oct 25, 2008 21:56:18 GMT -5
Mae... your story hasn't started out like Meet Joe Black, but Joe Blace (Brad Pitt...YUM) was death in the movie and was walking around like a man on Earth. Girl, you GOTTA make an attempt to see that movie. It was AWESOME! ;D
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Post by maegnas on Oct 26, 2008 7:46:38 GMT -5
ah okay ouf because I don't want people to think I saw the thing and tried it hehe and maybe someday I will I don't know ;)probably get hit for that but ... i don't like Brad Pitt ... :s okay I know I am a strange girl
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Post by Tina ☺ on Oct 26, 2008 8:34:27 GMT -5
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Post by maegnas on Oct 26, 2008 21:32:47 GMT -5
I told you I am a weird person Honestly I can't even say who I think is the cutest guy alive ... I find a lot of men attratictive but don't know who is the sexiest ... (it changes with my mood LOL) ah well. If they show it on tv (which they will do soon enough I'm sure) I'll watch it I swear And BTW I will admit that I liked Brad Pitt in Interview with the Vampire - and please don't ban me I won't say it again ... after all I like Darren Hayes too hunh that is something |
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? Alright, I'm gonna hafta ban ya if ya keep talkin' like that!!! 