Villa Le Duvall

[Tina ☺]

Hehehe.... that's why I gave him a bigger part in this one. EVERONE loves Stephen!

Thanks Mae! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. I plan to make a point of trying to get started on screenshots, etc for the next chapter tomorrow because I don't want there to be such a big delay on the next chapter. Things will slow down some after that though because of the holiday season and having to decorate, shop, etc. Bah... humbug!

[maegnas]

yes shorter delay. but I undertsand evertyone has a lot of things to do durin g the holiday (yeah vacation time! hehe)

[Nikki]

Wow! That was really good!

But what on Earth are they going to do to Donovan?? They can't hurt him! No no. lol

And DJ, what about her, eh? Another victim?? I tell you...

Well, another great chapter. Have it bookmarked along with 5 stars for you. ;D

[Tina ☺]

Oh yea Mae... busy time of year, unfortunately. *sigh*

Thanks Nikki! Glad you enjoyed it! ;D Well, I wanted to use a sim self in the story and Pixx volunteered so I wrote her into it...hehe. At first I didn't really know what I was going to do, but then I got it all figured out.

Sorry... you'll just have to wait and see what happens in upcoming chapters. I can't give away the plot. That wouldn't be any fun, would it?

[snazzyhack]

I have to make a simself!!!
I LOVE the story. I actually said out loud, 'oh wtf, don't stop the story NOW....!' I can't wait to see what happens next, but I also never want the story to end.
Part of me wants to somehow see Penelope come back to save Louis, but that would be too easy, and the heartache he feels is really what drives the story. Sigh. Poor Louis.

Nov 23, 2008 14:57:20 GMT -5 Tina ☺ said:

Thanks Nikki! Glad you enjoyed it! ;D Well, I wanted to use a sim self in the story and Pixx volunteered so I wrote her into it...hehe. At first I didn't really know what I was going to do, but then I got it all figured out.

[Tina ☺]

Glad you liked it, Snazzy! ;D Yea, poor Louis. Right now I have definitely mixed emotions as to how I want to do the final ending. Looks like that is still a good bit away though. I had a pretty solid ending in my head even before I began writing writing the story, but it has changed several times since then and sometimes it confuses me.

If I can't decide, this crazy story may never end!

[maegnas]

which would be a good thing for us but not for you hehehe

[Tina ☺]

That's so true.... This story is a LOT of work! I don't want to make it into a soap opera... hehe

Okay, Pixx sent her comments to my PM box so in order to save them, I am going to quote them here. She always cracks me up with her 'critique' and I thought it would be fun to share her thoughts with you guys too...lol

Nov 23, 2008 20:33:47 GMT -5 Pixx said:

Well I'm reading it now, had to wait for the little monsters to clear out before I could read in peace. My wireless router yeah I'm in bad enough a mood to throw it out the window (thus breaking the window and hearing a satisfying clatter of glass in the process). I hate using this computer...

Anyhew...
What a horrible picture of Joseph he looks like he's the one about to faint and not Shannon lol. I like Shannon's outfit by the way it's cute and I think I have her shirt in black...

Wow...I kinda missed Louis. Lucinda is a bit late in coming to the conclusion that Louis has taken leave of his senses. Penelope!!! Woah he's more off his rocker than I thought lol maybe he should eat some of his sister's special ointment. Woah!!! Stephen told him what!?! Woo! Go Stephen!!!

Donovan who? Wow my sim self is weird looking...ick . I think i need some Sominex now...so I can fall asleep and dream about that car LOOK AT IT!!! I have a weird obsession for cars I like em more than cake. Oh great my simself will be Louis's next meal.

Wow that ah...whoo! Man that is a freaky sight...Yeah! Good time to think you're dreaming D.J. Bigmouth!!!

Why do you people always do that to me!!! Wait until your story is going good then come around and end it!!! Ugh!!! I'm going to rant now...

I swear this girl just cracks me up!

Hehehe... well Pixx, like I replied to your pm.. I won't leave ya hangin' as long as the last time. I'm going to begin working on the next chapter tomorrow. Now this story is in my head once again and won't let me rest until I write some more.

Sorry about the 'hanger', but a girl's gotta do something to keep y'all coming back for more!

[jillyson]

5 big shinies from me, as usual!!! How sad that, with a broken computer travelling across the country, you still manage to put out a chapter before I did! Lol! You sure left us hanging with Gabby...I can't wait to find out what's been going on with HER for the past 2 years! You are an evil, evil woman! (but we sure suck it up, don't we?)

[Tina ☺]

Hehehe....

Thanks Gilly! Well, I definitely plan to cover a bit more in the upcoming segment. I love how everyone is curious about something different with this story. It helps to keep me focussed and centered so that I don't overlook anything important!

[joandsarah]

I feel for poor Shannon. I like the Snidelies?(sp) But a flaming bag of poop on Louis! I hope Pixx has some up her sleave that she can dump on him and then she can have some cake. ;D
Hopefully Lucinda and or Stephen will fix him perminently.

Great chapter as always Tina.

[Tina ☺]

Flaming bag of poop! Hehehe...

Thanks Jo! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[Pixx]

Ha ha I got pulled over by the police, see why I hate cops!?!

[Sarie]

YEAH!

Hopefully Pixx will get her cake next chapter!!

[Tina ☺]

She got some! Didn't you see her at the end?

Of course when Louis is finished with her, she may be craving something else instead of cake...