Villa Le Duvall

[joandsarah]

Wow you managed that pretty quickly! Now I just need to wake up enough to read it!

Those pics of Ellie looking scared, how do you get those. None of those hacks that I have seem to have a fear response.

Poor Ellie, now I feel sorry for her.

Typo: Ellie told me that she would she always catch you staring at her in a funny way.

Wow great chapter as always Tina. I really hope someone is going to come to the rescue/breakout soon. Lol I need some light relief now!

[Tina ☺]

Cool! I'm dying for someone to read it so I'll have an opinion on what you think. Crissie didn't read it this time. She was being a butt...lol

[lilyflower]

Hooray, an update! Aw it's not like I like Ellie but I don' want her to die (I've forgotten what her real name was!) Donovan and Sasha make an adorable couple. I assume if Donovan ever goes back to Earth, he'd take Sasha with him (Hopefully!) Again, you leave me in anticipation. Update soon or I may throw a spastic fit!

[jillyson]

Woot! Off to read! DH just left to get some milkshakes (bye bye diet!) so I have some alone time!

Edit: AWESOME!!! I'm so glad Donnie lived! Now it wil be interesting to see who Sacha chooses to love - Stephen never really says how he feels about her, we only see how she feels about him. Can't wait to see what the next chapter brings! Oh, I almost forgot to state the obvous - 5 stars, of course! Lol!

[Tina ☺]

Yay! I'm glad at least you three liked it! ;D LOL... Lily, her name is Gabriella. Hopefully it won't be too long before the next chapter, Lily.

Man... I want a milk shake now! *throws fit*


Edited to add Jo to number of readers...lol

[joandsarah]

Umm I replied up there too.

[Tina ☺]

Crap, I missed your edit Jo! Sorry.... *sniff*

Glad you likeed it Jo! Hmmm, I can't remember exactly which thing I did for that pose. I have quite a few action hacks that I use. I may have to open my game and actually experiment to give you that answer...lol

Well, at least you got your 'light relief' from the Sim Mania thread.

Thanks for pointing out the typo, but you know what? I'm actually terrified to try to fix it after what happened the last time I made some edits...lol

[Aussie Karima]

:'(Oooh! Gabriella is in a spot, will she ever know she tried to kill her own brother? I know you will not tell me Tina! & your reply is "read the next chapter" right? needless to say you got five, big fat shiny stars, from me! gold of course!
There is only one problem! I still NEED to read more, MORE I TELL you! but really thanks,I love your story! read you soon!

[Tina ☺]

Thank you Karima! I'm glad you love it! ;D I'll try to not let it be too long before my next update. One of these days, I'll actually find an ending for this story... lol

[joandsarah]

Yes the thought of a whole chapter vanishing just from a little edit is enough to make me run for the hills too.

[Tina ☺]

Well, I went and fixed it in the story editor last night, but the exchange is acting stupidly, so NO WAY am I going to try to update it until that site is acting nicely. Maybe more typos, if there are any, will be pointed out that I can fix and they'll all get fixed at the same time..lol. It REALLY bugs me that it's there, but I'd rather leave it there than to have my story deleted because that site sucks.

[jillyson]

I didn't notce any, but I was so caught up in fiding out what happened, that I wouldn't have noticed if there was a hundred! Lol!

[Tina ☺]

Well, I'm glad you liked that much! It's too bad more people haven't noticed, read it, and rated it. It's been up over a day and still hasn't reached five stars. I have seen stories not nearly as well written as mine reach five stars faster. Ah well, it's just a thang anyway. lol

[joandsarah]

Bp, Bp, BP... Really post around on a huge place like that and your readership will go up. Maybe you should come join the contest. Yes see I am brilliant. ;D Mi has this cheesy contest up. It takes a long time without having do to too much. So it isn't time consuming. All you need do is pick/make a grilled cheese sim. Then post a pic and intro by I think it's the end of this month. That's the first round. Really Mi has a few contestants now but not many have actually entered so she needs some more people. There is also a chat thread for it. Most of those people also have LJ's.

I really do think posting around so people know who you are helps a lot.

Maybe...do I dare even suggest it, post back on the bbs again. *Hides under a bag* I am sure you have readers who don't know you have updated. Also LJ, do a post there, add more friends and more people will see when you update.

Adding the contest link: www.forums.boolprop.com/viewtopic.php?f=215&t=38864

[holleyberry]

Apr 4, 2009 15:54:15 GMT -5 Tina ☺ said:

Chapter ten is up! ;D

WooHoo! Come home from a weekend away and find an update! I'm going to go read now!

Great Update Tina! I loved it.

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