Villa Le Duvall

[maegnas]

oh yeah when I noticed I was literally freaking out! Hope your story goes back to 5 stars quick

[Tina ☺]

Thanks Mae, but it seems like nothing is quick today. This site even slow and quiet.

Ah well, I should go to my recliner and relax a while anyway. It's been sort of a rough day.

[maegnas]

don't worry I'm sure it will be back to 5 stars quickly If you reuploaded it it will be back in the new stories section maybe so new people will find it

[jillyson]

Still at four. Maybe some folks haven't had a chance to go back and re-rate it yet.

I was glad I got the chance to go back and read it again. (like I wouldn't have anyway! lol!) I don't think I mentioned how much I like that you explained how the family was able to move on. Well done! Oh, and did I mention Thomas? (only about a thousand times!)

[Tina ☺]

Thanks Mae! I don't think any new readers have found it lately.

Thank you too, Jilly. I did work very hard on this chapter to try to explain a few things. This story is coming straight out of my head and is not based on anything I have ever read or seen anywhere else, so it racks my poor brain a bit at times. I'm hoping I'm getting my point across without it being too confusing.

I knew you'd like the 'Thomas Factor'! I work my proverbial ass off on this story and I'm just happy that there are those folks who are enjoying it. It really does my heart good.

[maegnas]

oh thats sad if no one new found it
And don't worry you are not confusing in your story I've read some confusing stuff and that's not!

[Tina ☺]

Well that's good to know. ;D Thanks Mae!

[Pixx]

FINALLY!!!!!!!!! Chapter 9!!!!!!!!! *happy dance*

Lets start from the spooky green eyes on the cover that seemed to have embedded themselves in my mind...

And Louis is still a freak good to know. Seriously, someone needs to just slap him over the head a few times. Ugh! I like the one in my game better because I can boss him around...*evil thoughts about captive Louis*. If I hurt him we can always blame Tina right ;D

Dang it! Tina! Stop making him cry over Donny Boy, I can't be mad when he's crying

.... man he's twisted. Does he seriously not see himself as the home wrecker? <--Louis' smiley ....And suddenly I'm afraid of what he's gonna do to poor...angry Gabriella.

Yes Thomas! Hopefully he does away with Louis. Although I love/hate Louis. Awww Tina!!!! I just don't know! Love him or hate him? Hey I've got it! Love him to death ;D ;D

...Um...does anyone else notice how real Thomas looks on the slide where he's sitting on the bed? Anyways, I *heart* the earrings . OMG! I just *heart* Thomas. He's so *heart*able. He's the bold one. He'll be the one to kick Louis' butt ;D

Why is he the most decorated Duvall? Does he come with accessories when you download him? I never really noticed. Wow, they're so distracting... He's my favorite right now...no offense Stephen. Holy crap!!! Look at that face! It's sooo cute!!! Tina, that's my favorite pic and I'm stealing it. Guess what it is before you see the spoiler. NO CHEATING!!!

SPOILER: Click to show

I swear this is the best picture in that whole chapter...I'm distracted...

Hey...all of them can do the hypnotizing thing? I thought only Louis could... LOL@Tina. Elvis obsessed? He was a pretty dude....*drool*

I like the pic with Shanon and the Hubby too. Those two should get a...curtain ;D

Awww damn Tyler!!! Ellie is just as crazy as Louis, they should run away together and make lots of demented babies...no scratch the babies that's too dangerous.


Oh great a cliff hanger! Tina! Bad girl! Now you know you can't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter. I could really explode this time.

[maegnas]

nice everyone seems to be in total adoration with Thomas right now which leaves Stephen and Louis all to myself hihihi

And Tina you are welcome. It's the truth anyway If someday someone tells you you write confusing crap well let me tell you I'd love to read more crap like that hehe (not that I think it will happen but hypothetically)

[Tina ☺]

Thanks Mae. It's good to hear stuff like that.

LOL...Pixx! I LOVE your step by step reviews! ;D I'm glad you enjoyed it. Of course they can hypnotize... they are Duvalls!

Don't worry, I don't intend to let it go so long before the next chapter this time around. Like I said, the next segment is already brewing in my mind. Thanks for reading!

[Tina ☺]

Mar 12, 2009 22:07:56 GMT -5 Nikki said:

Um, I need to catch up.. lol

I'm not even sure which one I left off on. 7 or 8 maybe. :/

Dang girl! Get busy reading. What's the matter with ya?

Don't know why I didn't see this post until now... Anyway, the story is getting pretty juicy now.

[lilyflower]

Tina you do realize that you have to update NOW right? I mean it I will come over there and force you to update because soon I will be losing fingernails thanks to your cliffhanger! Did I mention how awesome your new chapter was? I didn't? Well it's awesome and wonderfully well written!

[Tina ☺]

Thanks Lily! ;D I'm glad you enjoyed it. Don't worry... I won't make y'all wait as long as I did the last time.

Mar 15, 2009 12:54:37 GMT -5 Pixx said:

Why is he the most decorated Duvall? Does he come with accessories when you download him? I never really noticed. Wow, they're so distracting... He's my favorite right now...no offense Stephen. Holy crap!!!

LOL! I missed this earlier, Pixx. Sorry... Actually, (and I could have used this for a fun fact) that is not the 'actual' Thomas Duvall in those vamp scenes. Oh, it's Thomas alright, but he is the 'original' vamp who bit Shannon at the end of 'Shadows Linger in Darkness'. When I made him, it was the end of the story, so... he had no 'brothers and sisters'. When I decided t continue the story in sequels, I made him again, along with the rest, so they would actually be related to each other. But when I re-made Thomas, I forgot to put on his accessories...lol. So, I figured I'd use his original self when in vamp form so he'd have all the 'decorations' on that he had in his 'original' scene.

[jillyson]

See? And you guys were all "Thomas?". Now you remember his supreme hotness!

[maegnas]

Nah I still prefer Louis and Stephen You girls can keep Thomas I will keep the supreme hotnesses