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Post by §Haily§ on Mar 23, 2009 18:41:51 GMT -5
Ok,they are pretty short so i'm going to put THREE poems on here. OK,first one. I'm not supposed to love you
I'm not supposed to care.
I'm not supposed to live my life
Knowing you were there.
I'm not supposed to wonder
Where you are or what you do.
I'm sorry,I can't help it cause I'm in love with you. Poem#2!!! I never felt so sad
Until you broke my heart
I only wish you can see me
so broken and apart
everywhere i go
everywhere i see
reminds me of you and me
and what we used to be. Poem#3 I was riding on a cloud
I never knew was fake
It seemed like you were there for me
But my heart was for you to brake
I guess it wasn't meant to be
Because you never loved me.
I was flaoting on cloud that was fake.
I was another heart for you to brake. |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 23, 2009 19:05:35 GMT -5
Nice poems, Haily, but awfully cynical for girl your age.  You should be writing poems about flowers, trees, parties... you know, happy stuff!  |
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Post by §Haily§ on Mar 25, 2009 18:44:36 GMT -5
Actually,those poems I thought when I was depressed......sorta.....now i'm not!!!!! Because I know the truth behind all of the drama i have been going through and all of that stuff so....YEAH!!!
Wanna poem about trees,Tina? I'll give you a poem about trees....
I part the out thrusting branches
and come in beneath
the blessed and the blessing trees.
Though I am silent
there is singing around me.
Though I am dark
there is vision around me.
Though I am heavy
there is flight around me.
Happy?
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 26, 2009 5:16:31 GMT -5
Nah, it repeats 'around me' too many times.  J/k |
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Post by §Haily§ on Mar 26, 2009 17:21:43 GMT -5
Well pshh.I gave you what you wanted and you're still not happy? Can't I ever please you?
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Post by jillyson on Mar 26, 2009 20:15:53 GMT -5
I think that I shall never see
a poem as lovely as your tree...poem
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Post by §Haily§ on Mar 28, 2009 16:54:58 GMT -5
i love my tree poem too! Thanks Jilly! good job on making an atempt to making a poem,Jilly! It starts out great! ;D |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 31, 2009 8:42:22 GMT -5
@jilly! ;D
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Post by §Haily§ on Mar 31, 2009 16:36:11 GMT -5
Well,I was skimming through my old notebook I created when I was ten.I found it all dusty in an old hiding place i keep all my stuff that is special to me.But i forgot that this journal had some of my good poems in it.When i found a poem about a tree in there,the first thing I thought of was Tina and how she would be happy about my tree poems! I couldn't even believe I wrote this at ten years old! This poem is about where I live.I mention the brooke and the trees and how I feel to be around them.This is my fav poem. I have always felt the living presence
of trees
the forest that calls to me as deeply
as I breathe,
as though the woods were marrow of my bone
as though
I myself were tree, a breathing, reaching
arc of the larger canopy
beside a brook bubbling to foam
like the one
deep in these woods,
that calls
that whispers home Can't you believe that I wrote that at ten! |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Apr 7, 2009 15:31:39 GMT -5
That's very nice, Haily!  |
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Post by §Haily§ on Apr 7, 2009 16:20:25 GMT -5
thanks.maybe i should make a thread in here about tree poems.... hmmm...  |
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