Kittielove
Quiet Observer
[M0:0][ss:Black/Purple]
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Post by Kittielove on Jan 29, 2009 21:54:15 GMT -5
You may not find me pleasant, You may not like my style, You may not like the way I look for it may make you howl. When I pass peoples path, they feel their life's ruined for the day. I mean to cause no trouble, I'm good in every way. Some people may look at me, and scream with fright. maybe that's because, My coat's as black as night. They put all this upon me With their atrocious lies. Their superstitious beliefs, brings tears to my eyes. Believing me a witches pet They threw me to the fire. I loath who ever made it up, what sickening liar.
But I have great vision, and I have great poise. And if you were to own me, I wouldn't make much noise. My eyes are like the moon, My teeth are pearly white. Don't fear to come near, I promise I won't bite. I exterminate your pests Sooth you when your sad, Yet you may still kick me when your really mad. You may not think me smart, as my enemy canine. In fact he is dull witted, and very asinine. So I ask you to respect me, to pat me on my head. Or I'll leave a little present Inside your comfy bed.
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Tina ☺
Administrator
Chillin'
[M0:42]Oh yea....bite me![ss:Black/Purple]
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Post by Tina ☺ on Jan 29, 2009 22:19:34 GMT -5
Wow Kittie, I really like this one! Thanks so much for posting it!
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Kittielove
Quiet Observer
[M0:0][ss:Black/Purple]
Posts: 16
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Post by Kittielove on Jan 30, 2009 21:51:08 GMT -5
Thanks.
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Tina ☺
Administrator
Chillin'
[M0:42]Oh yea....bite me![ss:Black/Purple]
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Post by Tina ☺ on Feb 1, 2009 12:06:52 GMT -5
OH wow, I LOVE the graphic in your siggy!
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Post by Pixx on Feb 1, 2009 15:53:44 GMT -5
I love the graphic in your siggy more ;D ;D ;D
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Marie
Quiet Observer
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Post by Marie on Feb 16, 2009 1:08:16 GMT -5
I love it! You should post more!
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lilyflower
Canny Clerk
[M0:0]Defying normal since 1995[ss:Black/Purple]
Posts: 230
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Post by lilyflower on Mar 15, 2009 19:33:35 GMT -5
Kittie I really enjoyed this poem! I loved your creatively descriptive vocabulary and the persona of the black cat was very realistic. Great job!
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Post by §Haily§ on Mar 18, 2009 16:22:02 GMT -5
Aww,it's true too.I was thinking that when people saw a black cat run acrossed the street near my school on Friday the thirteenth. Megan and I were the only ones who "dared" to go pet it. Turns out the cat's name was Serenity.She's really pretty too
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jillyson
Diligent Librarian
Twozaks in Other Realms
[M0:6]"Now where have they gone? I seem to have lost my marbles again!" [ss:Luscious Lavender]
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Post by jillyson on Mar 18, 2009 17:36:01 GMT -5
Really nice, Kittie!
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