Nikki
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Princess of Poise
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Post by Nikki on Nov 25, 2008 22:27:41 GMT -5
I just wanted to share a poem that I wrote at a writing camp during the Summer after I graduated out of the 2nd grade. Here it is... lol Give me a peaceful spot, To write down all my thoughts. Give me a flowing river, Where I can sit and swim in. Give me a field, To run and play in. Give me an enormous garden of flowers Where I can be alone. Give me a secret place, Where I can lay undisturbed. Give me a tree house, Where nobody can find me. Give me a place, Where I can sit and write.
Give me a secret place, Where I can lay undisturbed. So there it is! Thanks for reading.
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Tina ☺
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 25, 2008 23:07:52 GMT -5
Awesome Nikki! Wow.. you wrote that in second grade? It's adorable! It's pretty intense for a second grader. You already knew you wanted to write! Thanks for sharing that with us.
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Nikki
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Princess of Poise
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Post by Nikki on Nov 26, 2008 15:23:16 GMT -5
Hehe...I was quite a little determined second grader, I was! And thanks for replying.
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Nov 26, 2008 19:51:26 GMT -5
Holy Cow! 2nd grade??? If you wrote that NOW, I'd think it was awesome!
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Nikki
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Princess of Poise
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Post by Nikki on Nov 27, 2008 11:17:29 GMT -5
LOL Well...I'm glad you think I had great maturity/smartness for a second grader, or the my maturity/smartness is that of a second grader. ;D Just kidding. Thanks for replying you both! I'm glad you liked it.
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