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Post by mercifulplay on Oct 27, 2008 17:48:18 GMT -5
A song of beauty
There's a song in the wind a whistle in the breeze a sweet rhythmic sound in the rustle of trees a portrait in the storm clouds a drum beat in rain a flute in the bird's cry a sound that remains beauty in the blue sky lillies in the valley love in the moonlight peace on the sea. P.S. I really enjoy reading other people's poems, not my own. Come on people-post something.
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Post by Tina ☺ on Oct 27, 2008 17:57:59 GMT -5
Oh I really like really this one! It's calm, and serene and gives a feeling of peace... I appreciate very much your making use of this forum, Merci! Hopefully some others wil follow suit and post something. Me? I do not write poetry very often. It's not quite my forte... If I did, or still had a copies of the couple I have written, I would gladly post them up!
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Post by lyse328 on Oct 27, 2008 18:01:10 GMT -5
Okay, this stuff sounds like professional poet's work. I'm serious. I just did the whole studying poetry thing, and this is really good stuff Merci. You should really look into doing this professionally or something. I posted something! It's not super good, but I wrote it in, like, March... anyway, I contributed, lol!
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Post by mercifulplay on Oct 27, 2008 18:04:58 GMT -5
Wow...Thanks so much for your kind words. Never in a million years would I have thought anyone would actually like my poems, since (for one) I don't consider myself a poet, I just get into these moods, and I write down my thoughts.
Thanks again. Your compliments mean so much!!!
Merci...
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Post by Tina ☺ on Nov 8, 2008 12:00:16 GMT -5
Well you are very good at! Got any more? Thanks again for posting these!
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