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Post by mercifulplay on Oct 27, 2008 14:22:15 GMT -5
Is it really worth the heartache, the shame? Is it really Worth the trouble, the pain? Is it really worth the time that is wasted? Is it really worth the bitterness tasted? Is it really worth the all night tears? Is it really worth the now gone years? Is it really worth the bad memories? Is it really worth the constant grief? Is it really worth discretion? Is it really worth depression? Is it worth the flowing tears? Is it worth the lasting fears? Is it worth a broken heart? Was it worth it from the start?
Mercifulplay
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Tina ☺
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Post by Tina ☺ on Oct 27, 2008 14:27:42 GMT -5
Whoa! Wow, Merci, that was GREAT! For some reason, I actually got goosebumps while reading that! Thanks SO much for sharing it with us. Now I am very glad I made the poetry board, even though the member who suggested it hasn't posted anything yet. *narrows eyes* You know who you are! ;D
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Post by Ink on Oct 27, 2008 15:39:04 GMT -5
That was really good!! I'm glad you made the poetry board too! Not that I can write poems but obviously Merci can
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Post by lyse328 on Oct 27, 2008 15:50:05 GMT -5
That was really beautiful mercifulplay... really. I could really feel the emotion as I read it, and that is a hard thing to do in writing.
I'm so glad you are sharing these poems with us! I can't wait to read more!
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Post by mercifulplay on Oct 27, 2008 17:32:19 GMT -5
Thank you all so much for your compliments. Honestly, I don't feel I can write poems unless under a certain spell. I have another one I've been wanting to post, but I feel because of the nature of it that it needs an introduction. I was inspired to write it to express the feelings of the children I once worked with. They had been through all sorts of things. With that being said, I will post it, and another very short poem (very few words-I kinda like).
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