Tina ☺
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Post by Tina ☺ on Oct 24, 2008 8:03:16 GMT -5
For One Last Time to lil Iverson. You know who you are.
For one last time, will I see your sweet face, play ball on the court, or run around playing chase.
For one last time, will I watch you play, knowing the time would soon fade away.
For one last time will I tickle your sides, while you run away for a place to hide.
For one last time will I tuck you in at night, hugging you tightly, with all of my might.
For one last time will I hear the sound of your silly little giggle when you're around.
For one last time will you dance once more, moving like you've never before.
May I take this moment to remember you, and all the fun things we used to do.
For one last time may I tell you, I miss you, and I'll always love you.
~ Merciful playI wrote it for a little boy I used to work with when he left the program I worked for. He was so sweet. Since no one else posted a poem, I figured I'd get it started... Mercifulplay (note from Tina)
Hey guys! Nice poem, huh? Thanks for submitting this Merci! She was running short on time and asked if I would post this up for her. Please take a moment to read it and comment. She has asked for critique. Thank you again for the wonderful poem, Merci! It's very sweet.
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Post by Crissy on Oct 24, 2008 14:20:32 GMT -5
That is a really nice poem! At first I thought it was about a dying mother talking to her child.
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Post by Harley on Oct 25, 2008 7:12:33 GMT -5
Awww How sweet and touching MP...... Nicely done.... Sounds like someone got very attached....
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jillyson
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Post by jillyson on Oct 25, 2008 18:57:40 GMT -5
I loved it! Thanks for posting it for us! Hopefully, once we all have more time, more poems will show up!
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storyfan
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Post by storyfan on Nov 8, 2008 11:55:08 GMT -5
This poem is SO beautiful! Thanks so much for sharing.
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