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Post by Aussie Karima on Dec 31, 2010 11:11:49 GMT -5
;D Oh wow daijahv I just friended you over on Sims3,what a small world, I just started reading yours!  |
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Post by valpre1983 on Dec 31, 2010 11:13:23 GMT -5
;D Sorry, I seem to be a bit teary!  ~ But that was so profound! And very scary!this could go so many ways! ~ I loved this Val,sorry about my very weak comment! That's okay Karima, but I'm running out of tissues to give you  HAHA! I found you! Call me a stalker and you'd be right! I'm not ashamed to admit it! There is no escape for you now (I told you Kathy Bates has nothing on me!) Daijahv, should I be worried LOL. Just kidding. It's good to see you here  |
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Post by daijahv on Dec 31, 2010 11:15:12 GMT -5
;D Oh wow daijahv I just friended you over on Sims3,what a small world, I just started reading yours! Lol thank you I hope you enjoy it! You can totally blame Val for me being here to |
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Post by valpre1983 on Dec 31, 2010 11:28:14 GMT -5
And I'm chapter four of Desired ;D
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Post by qui on Dec 31, 2010 11:31:12 GMT -5
What a scary place Leigh has to be in! I cringed when he told her to wash herself because his scent was all over her! Then said he saw her!
I pray...PRAY that this experience with Vlad doesn't impact her feelings toward Krisis negatively!
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Post by valpre1983 on Dec 31, 2010 11:52:47 GMT -5
What a scary place Leigh has to be in! I cringed when he told her to wash herself because his scent was all over her! Then said he saw her! I pray...PRAY that this experience with Vlad doesn't impact her feelings toward Krisis negatively! Ah Qui  , it pained me to writer this. Leigh will have a hard time getting over this if she gets out alive. Vladimir's violated everything Leigh holds dear, including her love for Krisis  |
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Post by dblondepimpett on Dec 31, 2010 11:56:33 GMT -5
Great Chapter as always Krisis come be Leigh's Night and Shining Armor! He is probably worried sick! and I agree with Qui I have to hold my breath every time he gets near her because it is so disgusting and evil! but I think once and if Krisis gets her out she is going to have some post traumatic issues to deal with.... P.s Thanks for the gift in ts3 |
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Post by valpre1983 on Dec 31, 2010 12:52:03 GMT -5
Kristen, if he knew Leigh's in trouble, he'd move mountains for her. Yeah, Vladimir does have an overwhelmingly evil presence, it's amazing Leigh's still functioning after what she's been through. I agree, the trauma will be there, and hopefully she'll get the care she needs. You're welcome |
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Post by jillyson on Dec 31, 2010 13:34:58 GMT -5
Wow. My mind is completely blown! I can feel Leigh's horror; the hopelessness, the hope surging back when she thought she saw a window of escape, the black pit of despair when it was snatched away. You were definitely right to post these together - they needed to be that way. You wrote her experiences so perfectly - I can't imagine anyone thinking you were sensationalizing what she's going thru - the sad truth is, there IS evil in the world, and horrible things do happen to good people. Sometimes they make it thru, sometimes they don't and sometimes, they're trapped somewhere between. It's truly an art to be able to convey all of that the way you do.
OK, enough deep stuff - I'm sure Krisis must have planned a way to check on her well being while he was gone, and soon he's going to realize she's missing, as will Dev. Dev will probably assume she's with Krisis, and I can't imagine him not using his contacts in the business to find Krisis and let him have it. That, if nothing else, should bring him racing home - I just hope there's something of Leigh left to save! Hurry, Krisis!!!
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Post by valpre1983 on Dec 31, 2010 14:20:21 GMT -5
Jill, I think I made a lot of people sad in this one *hugs*, it will all be over soon. I didn't want to drag it out for too long, plus I thought it would make sense for everything to be read together without breaks in between.
Thank you, that means a lot to me, as much as your support and encouragement.
He'll move mountains to get to her, when he finds out she's in trouble. The next update will focus on Devon and how he's dealing with his sister's disappearance. |
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Post by valpre1983 on Jan 1, 2011 8:08:11 GMT -5
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Post by Aussie Karima on Jan 1, 2011 8:25:02 GMT -5
;)Wowa!
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Post by daijahv on Jan 1, 2011 9:37:45 GMT -5
I'm cheesing so huge lol awesome chapter! And I'm commenting everywhere again But wowzers!! Dev is just...incredible |
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Post by jillyson on Jan 1, 2011 10:39:01 GMT -5
I knew Dev would come riding to the rescue, and I sure hope Krisis puts on his blurr-run and high tails it back to town - he may have to save both Leigh AND Dev!
LOVE Devon's determination - he really gave it to Tamsyn, and I love that he brough Eloise with him. If he bought bilboard space, he couldn't send a clearer message, but psycho still thinks she can get him back.
While it's great that she wants for fix things, she only wants to do so because it will help her. (At least in her mind, she thinks it will) I don't see that ending well for her - I just wonder for Vlad's sake, if you drink the blood of a psycho, does it make you crazy too? (Or in his case, crazier? Lol!)
I Agree, Dev's hot when he's angry! (is that wrong?) And I can't believe how much I love Cheryl! Even the drunk thinks Tamsyn's a nut job! Lol!
The man purse made me laugh out loud!
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Post by valpre1983 on Jan 1, 2011 10:50:46 GMT -5
Karima, I think this is the first time this year you've been left speechless  Daijahv, you and Qui will get into a fist fight over Devon, and I won't be around to referee it. Jill, this made me grin so hugely. I love the idea of his blur-run, for Leigh he will Agreed, the way Devon's feeling and acting right now, he may do more harm than good. He just needs to sit tight and wait for the Frosts. Yeah, bringing Eloise with him was a huge step and a billboard post. She's not just a rebound. She's in his life for good, and still Tamsyn doesn't get it. Hopefully this will be a wake up call for her. You're right, she's not fixing things because she's feeling remorseful, she just wants to get back on Devon's good side. Interesting you should point out the issue with drinking from a psycho...In his case, drinking from an insane person may have done something to his psyche, and that's what he is what is now. This is going to be explained in a later prompt. You too, you're joining Team Dev? Hello, there's still Krisis you know, I don't see anyone rooting for him. LOL! LOL, sit back, relax, I don't want you falling off your seat. Thanks for reading Jill. |
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