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Post by daijahv on Jan 4, 2011 7:47:33 GMT -5
I was half asleep will typing Chapter 5 for Season 4 and never went back to read it. I just reread it and um...it's weird lol So I have to redo this one I think...I don't know if any of it makes sense! I think it's mostly the parts with Sarah...although she was supposed to speak frantically... I don't know maybe I'll have to see how it works
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Post by qui on Jan 4, 2011 17:12:20 GMT -5
All caught up now! *happy dance* D rake...Vincent....Drake...Vincent... Yeah I wouldn't be able to choose either in I were in her shoes. She sees the side of Vincent he allows her to see and has him to thank for a lot of the things he had done for her, verses Drake ALWAYS being around and by her side through everything (minus the Abi thing).
I had my fingers for a baby...maybe soon? *crosses fingers*
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Post by daijahv on Jan 4, 2011 18:41:44 GMT -5
All caught up now! *happy dance* Drake...Vincent....Drake...Vincent... Yeah I wouldn't be able to choose either in I were in her shoes. She sees the side of Vincent he allows her to see and has him to thank for a lot of the things he had done for her, verses Drake ALWAYS being around and by her side through everything (minus the Abi thing).
I had my fingers for a baby...maybe soon? *crosses fingers* YAY! Glad you are caught up, now you can get some sleep lol. Drake and Zoe's relationship continues to strengthen. I love that Drake can understand Zoe's feelings for Vincent and how it developed into what it has. He has been more than man enough to admit he hurt knowing they were together and forgives her "explorations". He even allows her to have personal time alone with him (to a degree -- he was just inside the house and could hear their conversation). He doesn't fully trust Vincent. How could he? He has a reputation for using women and stealing his girlfriends just for the sick pleasure of tormenting Drake (which we'll learn more of coming soon). He just hopes Zoe continues to choose him and so far her heart is his. As for children...their lives are so crazy with all the push for power from so many different entities, it wouldn't be completely safe right now. But, we shall see Maybe Drake wouldn't mind a child to carry on his legacy, I know Zoe would want nothing more than to ensure her heritage survives, she remained a vampire for just that reason.
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Post by dblondepimpett on Jan 4, 2011 18:58:19 GMT -5
phew! I will have to start reading this Thursday! There is soo many seasons! wow oh wow! I have the whole day off Thursday soo!!!!!!! Yeah A lot of reading!
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Post by daijahv on Jan 4, 2011 20:50:56 GMT -5
phew! I will have to start reading this Thursday! There is soo many seasons! wow oh wow! I have the whole day off Thursday soo!!!!!!! Yeah A lot of reading! Hehe and it keeps going
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Post by valpre1983 on Jan 5, 2011 4:44:12 GMT -5
Whoa! I'm so glad to be all caught up. I love that each episode in Season 4 is focusing on a different theme. Hope you'll get back into longer storylines though. I've enjoyed this so much. And that Vincent, he's really a thorn on Drake's side. I just feel like squashing him.
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Post by daijahv on Jan 5, 2011 7:49:15 GMT -5
Whoa! I'm so glad to be all caught up. I love that each episode in Season 4 is focusing on a different theme. Hope you'll get back into longer storylines though. I've enjoyed this so much. And that Vincent, he's really a thorn on Drake's side. I just feel like squashing him. Lol. No love for Vincent? The theme episodes are tremendous fun, but there's an underlying storyline in play it's all kind of a build up for the later episodes.
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Post by valpre1983 on Jan 5, 2011 9:47:29 GMT -5
Something about Vincent screams 'fox' from a mile away.
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Post by daijahv on Jan 5, 2011 22:57:07 GMT -5
Here is Chapter 5: Trouble in a Red Dress desiredsims3.wordpress.com/s4-chapter-5-trouble-in-a-red-dress/And I'd like to warn you, if this makes no sense, I apologize for that. I really was half asleep as I wrote it and just never really edited it lol. I'm going to sleep now though. I have to get the images done for the next 3 chapters and the game keeps crashing on me. So I am giving up for the night.
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Post by dblondepimpett on Jan 5, 2011 23:24:48 GMT -5
Finally I read em! Lets go to the movies was epic! Scary loony man porttraying A movie! Even more epic! Think about it there are many people out there who probably get their crazy idea's from the movies! Okay Now I have read S4CH5 I had a feeling from the beginning that she was a succubus! I guess thats what I get for watching too much charmed though. :)Drake is just too sweet going and getting her signed up to be an artist.
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Post by qui on Jan 5, 2011 23:53:31 GMT -5
the evil came out of me for a second and although I was able to limit my words, I couldn't censor it Zoe is great! I would have been beyond jealous!!
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Post by valpre1983 on Jan 6, 2011 0:38:04 GMT -5
WHOA! I just had to read this before heading out for work. I think the title should have been Devil in a Red Dress. I can't believe Drake went gaga over her. I expected Vincent to go crazy over her, but not Drake. The girls are too calm, I would have gone Ted Bundy on that Succubus. You are doing such an amazing job with this, I can't say enough how much I'm enjoying it. And this is just you with a few props. Imagine what you could do with a Magical Expansion Pack. Whoa. It's gonna be epic. I hope EA releases one real soon.
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Post by dblondepimpett on Jan 6, 2011 2:39:20 GMT -5
WHOA! I just had to read this before heading out for work. I think the title should have been Devil in a Red Dress. I can't believe Drake went gaga over her. I expected Vincent to go crazy over her, but not Drake. The girls are too calm, I would have gone Ted Bundy on that Succubus. You are doing such an amazing job with this, I can't say enough how much I'm enjoying it. And this is just you with a few props. Imagine what you could do with a Magical Expansion Pack. Whoa. It's gonna be epic. I hope EA releases one real soon. I agree about the name! But unfortunatly it is hard for anyone to resist a sucubus! Charmed episode with the sucubus had even leo going all wacky!! I don't know why I refer to charmed I guess It reminds me a lot like it except there are vamps. Hmmm maybe that is like an episode of Buffy! I think you should be a show producer! I love it all Vincint has about got on my last nerve though! I mean come on!! Every one of the ones where he kissed Zoe made me cry for Drake. Truth be told if it were Zoe in his place there is no way in heck that she would be lenient on it! Cause women are just like that lol But I'll be glad for an update and I want to see what adventures they get into now!
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Post by Aussie Karima on Jan 6, 2011 7:45:46 GMT -5
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Post by daijahv on Jan 7, 2011 8:06:41 GMT -5
Finally I read em! Lets go to the movies was epic! Scary loony man porttraying A movie! Even more epic! Think about it there are many people out there who probably get their crazy idea's from the movies! Okay Now I have read S4CH5 I had a feeling from the beginning that she was a succubus! I guess thats what I get for watching too much charmed though. :)Drake is just too sweet going and getting her signed up to be an artist. So very true! And I love Charmed btw up until it started getting weird those last two seasons. I never saw those. I was hoping to make this episode a little scarier, but that was a little harder than I'd thought. the evil came out of me for a second and although I was able to limit my words, I couldn't censor it Zoe is great! I would have been beyond jealous!! I would have too without a doubt. But Zoe was trying to be understanding since he has been nothing but patient with her and the whole Vincent thing. WHOA! I just had to read this before heading out for work. I think the title should have been Devil in a Red Dress. I can't believe Drake went gaga over her. I expected Vincent to go crazy over her, but not Drake. The girls are too calm, I would have gone Ted Bundy on that Succubus. You are doing such an amazing job with this, I can't say enough how much I'm enjoying it. And this is just you with a few props. Imagine what you could do with a Magical Expansion Pack. Whoa. It's gonna be epic. I hope EA releases one real soon. I agree, that would have been a much better title! Sarah can't be too crazy because she doesn't want Zoe to get suspicious and Zoe is trying to be as patient about matters of the heart as Drake has been with her. The reason Zoe didn’t go too crazy is because of the way she is around Vincent, Drake is understanding and so she tried to play it cool…ish. And Sarah is so scared Zoe will find out about her and Vincent that she didn’t want to seem to out of place as well. The whole time, Zoe is just thinking that Sarah was trying to get the woman away from Drake.Thank you for the compliment I am working extra hard to get the images done for the next few...hopefully they have a "creepier" feel...I hope 6 does though. OMG if there was a Magic EP I’d go NUTS!! I have the MTS Magic Mod modthesims.info/download.php?t=394684 and the MTS Weapon System nene.modthesims.info/download.php?t=402950 that I use to try and get some of the effects. It’s pretty fun, Zoe can pretty much kill anyone on the street LOL. Often times though I create a Sim and name it “Random Victim” (which always makes my BF laugh) just for the sake of having a body lying around. And you’re right about the title! I love it! I had a few title changes (as well as plot changes) before finally coming to that one. Thank you Val I’m very excited you are enjoying the story WHOA! I just had to read this before heading out for work. I think the title should have been Devil in a Red Dress. I can't believe Drake went gaga over her. I expected Vincent to go crazy over her, but not Drake. The girls are too calm, I would have gone Ted Bundy on that Succubus. You are doing such an amazing job with this, I can't say enough how much I'm enjoying it. And this is just you with a few props. Imagine what you could do with a Magical Expansion Pack. Whoa. It's gonna be epic. I hope EA releases one real soon. I agree about the name! But unfortunatly it is hard for anyone to resist a sucubus! Charmed episode with the sucubus had even leo going all wacky!! I don't know why I refer to charmed I guess It reminds me a lot like it except there are vamps. Hmmm maybe that is like an episode of Buffy! I think you should be a show producer! I love it all Vincint has about got on my last nerve though! I mean come on!! Every one of the ones where he kissed Zoe made me cry for Drake. Truth be told if it were Zoe in his place there is no way in heck that she would be lenient on it! Cause women are just like that lol But I'll be glad for an update and I want to see what adventures they get into now! Yeah that name would have been great! And it is hard to resist the Succubus, although at first I was intending to make her a Siren from Egypty disguised as a beautiful woman who was really a mummy, but realized I'd used the Mummy's curse death a few times previously and went with something different. (Wow that was a mouthful!) Lol thank you about the Producer comment, although Val once told me that if I were she'd cuss me out over cliffhangers Sorry about Vincent, he is a little devil And the next chapter is up ~ All men,even Vamps succumb to a Succubus,as there are human to begin with!!!!! ~ Loved this,the name had me laughing, but then I have an understanding of both languages! ~ I loved it as always!
~ I am amazed at what you are achieving in this! Bravo! ~OK,interesting name,do you know the meanings of them,one is Arabi & the other French(both mean female!the first has more attached to it!) ~I loved this,Succubus’s draw all males in,it is their thing! ~Loved it BTW!(“,) So very true! LOL I love the idea of adding the extra element of demons into the storyline. Should give the gang a run for their money. Karima!! Haha I’m glad you noticed! I choose names and wording in the spells very carefully and research the hell out of things lol! I found the name Hajar (Hagar – Hebrew origins) meaning “Forsaken” or “Stranger” and the name Femi (African origins) meaning “Love” or “Love me” and combined the two for the Succubus, a sex demon (Forsaken Love)!!! I love that you noticed that Thank you for reading it! I was hoping to build a little more on her Egyptian background but I got sidetracked lol. (Sorry for the book of comments, I still can only respond to one person every 15-20 minutes)
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