The Mobacy Ch 19 (updated 3rd January)

[joandsarah]

Well I won't know what everyone is saying until after I wake up either.. so torture! except I'll be asleep.

Thank you Tina and karima.

Can't wait to see what you think Jilly.

P.S Tina I will add a line crediting you with that wonderful cover. Sorry I forgot to.

[Tina ☺]

So I noticed. LOL! That's OK, Jo. It sure does look good up there, though, doesn't it? You made great choices on what to put on it because it certainly goes with the theme of the story.

[Aussie Karima]

We knew it was a TINA G! creation! it is beautiful & it does suit the story to a T!

[amylu1988]

Read it and commented over at boolprop Jo! ;D It was brilliant and I really enjoyed it, let me know if you want me to copy and paste my comment over here too.

And Tina, the cover did look awesome, nicely done.

[holleyberry]

Woot!!!
I got to go take Ethan to school soon, but this is the first thing on my list of things to do!!!!

[joandsarah]

Thanks guys, glad you enjoyed it. Seems like everyone liked that "Fat ugly ape" part down at that psychedelic lounge.

Tina maybe we can turn it into a siggy?

Thanks for being my sounding board ya'all because I really, really need it.

That's ok Amylu. You have already left me a nice comment here!

[Tina ☺]

Thanks y'all! ;D

Check your PMs, woman. I sent you a surprise that hopefully you will like!

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Jo:

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Great chapter! Poor Lottie! But yay too, I love that the Lotties are close but yet far away! Great job. Keep it up and I can't wait for the next update!

[joandsarah]

Thanks Ashley ;D

Now just waiting on Jilly to come back...

[jillyson]

Great chapter, Jo! All that worrying for nothing - the two Lotties came off like a dream!!!

I had to stop and pour over that cover to make sure I took it all in - outstanding job, Tina! It totally drew my eye!

The stormtrooper comment got things off to a great start, and it all got even better from there!

Poor Bernardo, so sad that Sophie doesn't love him back!
It was fun and cute to see all the hook-ups the kids made. Young love is fun to watch. (especially Evil Lottie and the "great snugly babe"!)

The montage was great - that girl really got around!!!

Now we need a Nic update, and more Phoebe! She seems to have a clue that no one else has! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!

Jo, you hit this one right out of the park!

[holleyberry]

Jo that was FANTASTIC!
I don't know what you were worried about. It turned out great!
LOL @ "Keep my seat warm you fat ugly ape." and your picture collages turned out good!
Of course, Nicoli isn't in this update *sniff* but I'm sure we'll see plenty of him later.
Loved It!

edit:
LOL I just noticed Evil Lottie's shirt! I love it!
I see you made use of those OMSP's with that shot with Stephen whats his name from Bluewater.

[jillyson]

I forgot to mention her shirt - that was too funny!

[joandsarah]

Yah, Jilly is back. ;D

Thanks so much for the comments. I really like to hear about the bits people enjoyed or found funny.
I hope that last scene with the kids meeting wasn't boring or too long? I figured they would have to have one what with all the rumers of Lottie flying about campus.
Nic will most likely have his own small picspam. It just didn't really fit in the chapter and seeing LJ was refusing even one more picture past the 90 I had, it would have had to have been chopped in half anyways.

I chose the backgrounds and the way the girls are standing. Tina found the evil green apple, and the text was her idea as was the purple. Then of course she puts it all together!

It only turns out great (Lol if you say so!) if I have a sounding board. I can't do the plotty without having someone to talk to. I tried my husband and he's no help. It just isn't what naturally comes to me. It's hard work. My style is just funny captions.

Now I already have the two main plot ideas worked out for the next part so that might go without quite so much sweat on my part.

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oh pretty new siggy Jo! it's really pretty. I love the evil Lottie! Mwhaaaaa

[Aussie Karima]

;D ;D I love your new siggy & I just caught up with your pic-spam, WOW! Nicoli turned out a HOTTIE!

;D I would offer my Simself for that, but I think their would be more fights between those two, than love!