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Post by joandsarah on Mar 12, 2010 17:24:23 GMT -5
All read. I still have a headache so I will leave a proper comment later at BP. I have that dress lol, it's a medieval formal. I was going to ask you if you wanted to look at medieval stuff like I did for Angels wedding. Glad Tina could help.
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Post by Tina ☺ on Mar 12, 2010 20:27:55 GMT -5
Phew, that was long! lol But awesome! ;D I loved Cale's reaction to Penny's belongings on the lawn. The ultimate murder of a cheerleader was a bit shocking...lol I enjoyed very much the alien abduction scene.
While I was reading, I saw quite a few things to comment on, but I think I've forgotten some if them now...lol. Anyway, I LOVED this chapter and I am glad you like the dress I hooked you up with. It looks great on Penny! ;D
Oh yeah, now I remember something:
I think it's very cool how you explained the pausing of time so that Penny's parents could be at her wedding. I'm very happy they were able to attend!
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Post by holleyberry on Mar 12, 2010 22:04:39 GMT -5
Just finished reading. I LOVED it! YAY for Penny figuring out a way to keep her parents around longer. Cale and Penny's first kiss "awwwwwwwww" Where did you get that PLAQUE? I LOVE IT!!! If killing cheerleaders is part of the OWBC then I need to take a closer look! Penny's dress was PERFECT! Great find Tina. I can't wait to see the next Generation of Phycologist grow up . Great job Amylu
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Post by Aussie Karima on Mar 13, 2010 0:44:09 GMT -5
;D Wow! ~ The whole explanation for time freezing was brilliance, I loved that!......those two finally have found each other even with there differences!The dress was perfect for her! I love this chapter, it was a long one (as you stated!) but very special! and very sweet! our little Penny has finally grown into a unique woman!And the fact that they shared their 'first Kiss & everything together' makes it that much more special! loved it!
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Post by amylu1988 on Mar 14, 2010 17:47:05 GMT -5
@jo: I read your comment at boolprop and replied, I'm glad you enjoyed it. The dress just looked right on Penny in-game, I wouldn't have known where to start with medieval stuff myself, but Tina's find was just right. Hope your headache is better now. @tina: I seem to be writing really long chapters lately, sorry! But I wanted to get it all in this one, and I'm glad you liked it. ;D The pausing of time thing was something I wanted to do with Penny, and her being a scientist helped so much with it. Cale and Penny were such fun, I don't think anyone else could handle her! holley: See my reply at boolprop, I'm glad you liked it! @karima: I'm so happy that the freezing time thing worked, I'd planed it for a while and I'm glad it came across okay, I really wanted Freud and Zoe to make it to Penny's wedding. For what was originally a surprise romance, Penny and Cale are so cute and happy together, they were great fun to play, and so easy to write as well. Thanks for reading!
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Post by jillyson on Mar 14, 2010 18:59:34 GMT -5
Oh my goodness! I forgot to comment! I was sure I left one here!
I don't want to sound like I didn't love it, but my comments are the same as everyone else's - exactly the same! Lol! I loved all of the above!
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Post by amylu1988 on Mar 15, 2010 15:11:59 GMT -5
That's okay Jilly, I thought you'd left one here too! I'm glad you liked it, it's lovely to hear from everyone who read it and it makes me want to go and write more! So, I really am going to go and play my game now, honest.... ;D
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Post by holleyberry on Mar 17, 2010 0:51:25 GMT -5
it's lovely to hear from everyone who read it and it makes me want to go and write more! Get to it WOMAN!!!
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Post by amylu1988 on Mar 19, 2010 15:13:42 GMT -5
I'm on it, don't worry.
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Post by valpre1983 on Apr 3, 2010 2:48:26 GMT -5
Hey Amy, I've just finished reading generation naught. This was so much fun to read. I like Bandura, she's got so much personality and so smart like her daddy and I'm glad she's the heir. I can't wait to see what she gets up to at uni. And I was so sad when she and Chewy couldn't get together. He's cute and seemed like such a nice young boy. Oh well, guess rules are rules eh. I'll be starting with generation one soon, so I should be all caught up by the end of the long weekend. This was super good. Great job. Val
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Post by amylu1988 on Apr 3, 2010 6:21:33 GMT -5
;D I replied on boolprop properly, but thanks again for reading Val, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hope you enjoy reading generation one too. I'm off to sort out the rest of chapter 13 now, see you all later!
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Post by jillyson on Apr 3, 2010 10:36:58 GMT -5
Yay! Go chapter 13!
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Post by amylu1988 on Apr 11, 2010 7:11:50 GMT -5
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Post by joandsarah on Apr 11, 2010 8:20:48 GMT -5
Pasted from BP Update buddies! That was such a sweet, but sad chapter Amylu. Especially Zoes passing with Freud crying. The start with Penny was really touching too. You fit all the births and birthdays in really well. The kids look adorable, even if they are really mean little tykes! :lol: So nice for Bandura to finally get a daughter. Hope those boys play nicely with her. Loved the ending with Lat playing the piano. (Can we call him Lat? I already forgot how to spell his full name. :? )
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Post by Tina ☺ on Apr 11, 2010 9:42:25 GMT -5
Great update! I love how you handled the birthdays and the passing of the founders. The tribute with all the pictures brought tears to my eyes. It's the end of an era, but life must go on.
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