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Post by valpre1983 on Sept 5, 2010 13:41:41 GMT -5
Thanks for putting this up. It will help a lot when I get confused with the characters. I love doing character bios too, that way when I lose the plot a little, I always go back there to sort of get the feel for the characters again and what they're about. I can't wait to see Gabby and Zara in action, since they're not each other's favorites  There's bound to be drama when it's such an odd number of girl friends, someone always feels left out  |
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Post by Loz on Sept 5, 2010 15:31:06 GMT -5
Thank you!  It's helping me too, because it means I'm going deeper into their characters than I normally would and it helps me to get to know them better myself Actually, one of the things I have left to work on before I post the first chapter is most of the Gabby/Zara fight scenes; I realised there isn't enough of them so far, so I'm adding a bit more in to sort of cement the relationship between the two of them because it's pretty important. So hopefully you should see lots of Gabby/Zara action by the time I've finished! |
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Post by jillyson on Sept 5, 2010 16:11:40 GMT -5
Sounds great! I really like the origin of their names - it was a fun & insightful thing!
although I had to laugh at Taylor Wood's name - it sounds like it would be a perfect name for an elf or fairy with those origins! Lol!
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Post by Loz on Sept 5, 2010 16:44:04 GMT -5
Hahaha, yeah! The name origins thing didn't really have much of an influence on my choice of names, but I just thought it was interesting |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Sept 5, 2010 19:19:34 GMT -5
;D I like the Bios, it is allways welcomed!  |
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Post by Loz on Sept 6, 2010 8:54:34 GMT -5
Thank you! |
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Post by Loz on Jan 6, 2011 22:50:08 GMT -5
Sorry for the double post, but I just wanted to inform everyone that I've FINALLY uploaded chapter 1... the link's in the first post |
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Post by jillyson on Jan 6, 2011 22:54:56 GMT -5
Yes!!! I can't wait to read it! It'll have to be tomorrow, but I'll get right to it!
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Post by Loz on Jan 6, 2011 22:58:55 GMT -5
Aw, thanks so much Jilly!! I stayed up all night to get it done, because I promised Amylu I'd have it finished by tomorrow so she has something nice to read when she gets back from her interview So as it's now 4 am here, I'm going to bed, I think... *falls asleep at keyboard* |
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Post by jillyson on Jan 6, 2011 23:02:09 GMT -5
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Post by Loz on Jan 6, 2011 23:06:38 GMT -5
Oooo, thank you; I didn't know I could do that! |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Jan 7, 2011 7:11:39 GMT -5
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Post by Loz on Jan 7, 2011 7:17:48 GMT -5
Hahah, I know; I suck at updating quickly But this is the hardest chapter to get out, I think, because it's the introduction. Now the story's set up I can run with it and have a great time I already have chapters 2 and 3 set out in my mind, so I know exactly what I need to do and how to do it, and there's going to be a lot more exciting stuff happening, so it should be a lot easier to write and therefore I'll have it up quicker. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it! |
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Post by jillyson on Jan 7, 2011 23:13:18 GMT -5
I never saw that coming!
I'm so mad at Jessie right now! He's aready shopping for a new study buddy & isn't even planning to apologize to poor Evie? I hope Evie finds a guy who'll treat her better & apreciate her. I bet that would give Jessie a giant wake up call!
I love Zara's new non-flirting buddy - the're so cute together! I'm glad she and Vance found each other.
Gabby & Taylor...I wonder how long they can continue with their exclusive/not exclusive relationship? Someone always gets hurt in the end!
So much drama and so realistic - I'm STILL mad at Jessie! Lol!
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Post by Loz on Jan 8, 2011 4:28:46 GMT -5
Hahaha, thanks for the comments Jilly! Awww, don't be too mad at Jesse; he was just drunk and stupid And he tends not to think before he acts. He wasn't trying to flirt with Angela or anything like that, and he didn't know Evie was there. It was just a horrible mix-up, but I'm sure it will be resolved in chapter 2... or will it? Ha, Zara's new non-flirting buddy... I like that Zara's so set on her sports career and pleasing her grandmother as well as herself that she just completely rules out the idea of romance. It's just not something she thinks she's interested in. But Vance is determined to change her mind about that... Ah, Gabby and Taylor... I have a whole bunch of stuff planned for those two, so watch this space Next chapter is about Gabby, so you'll see what happens between them. Thank you so much for the lovely comments and I'm really happy you think it's realistic; that was one of my concerns. Thank you!!! |
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