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Post by jillyson on Feb 16, 2010 12:24:53 GMT -5
You know we will! And it wouldn't be any fun if we could influence you - that would put a stop to all this witty banter! Lol! Half the fun is in guessing what's going on in that head of yours! You never disappoint.
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Post by Aussie Karima on Feb 16, 2010 12:35:21 GMT -5
;D Yes, we did all forget that Zhan, Nellie's best Friend! would love nothing more than to love Nellie, more than just a Friend, & I think Nellie knows something of that, because it is not just Ho Sung's sister, that stops her from talking about her problems with Zhan, & so sorry Val, but I agree with Jilly on this, I think Gustav would KILL to get his own way! (or have you forgotten Zhan's broken phone & his quick trip back home, missing his picnic with Nellie! For an order that did not exist!) And he wants to posses her, not love her!  And as for Youseff, well, lets say he seems to good to be true! ;D Ho Sung on the other hand seems to me, to be doing the right thing! (Tina...............  )  |
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Post by holleyberry on Feb 16, 2010 14:25:07 GMT -5
I would agree w/ everyone else about Gustav as well. I had forgotten about the broken phone thing. He seems to be a potentially dangerous guy.
I also agree with Jill about Ho Sung's cheating. i would have to see more of a back story to forgive so easily.
Thinking about it some more, Yousseff is HOT, and could be a potential rebound thing, but ultimately I think I am going to be:
Team Zhan!!!!
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Post by amylu1988 on Feb 16, 2010 15:40:17 GMT -5
but I do hope that whatever happens, y'all can still enjoy the story and be happy for Nellie no matter which guy she ends up with.... if any.  After all this talk of teams Nellie will just ride off into the sunset on her own! *Team Youssef and Team Zhan, I can't decide* |
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Post by jillyson on Feb 16, 2010 18:13:22 GMT -5
@ Riding off in the sunset alone! It would serve them all right! Team Zhan... Hmmmmmm.... |
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Post by holleyberry on Feb 16, 2010 18:55:54 GMT -5
Oh! I might be converting Jilly!
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Post by Tina ☺ on Feb 16, 2010 19:18:49 GMT -5
LMAO! I LOVE this discussion! I'll be back later to talk more about things, but now I'm being paged by dh to watch tv. I just popped in to say... Chapter Sixteen us UP! ;D tinag13.livejournal.com/6937.html |
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Post by jillyson on Feb 16, 2010 21:03:18 GMT -5
Ah! A bit more about mysterious Youssef...Yummy! It was fun going thru the tombs with Nellie, and watching her clumsiness win out a time or two!
Now I'm super-intrigued with Youssef! A good guy who doesn't know what his company is up to? A bad guy pretending he doesn't know? Someone who's in it for himself? This is really heating up!
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Post by holleyberry on Feb 16, 2010 21:06:06 GMT -5
I read this earlier, but I didn't have time to comment.
Good to see Youssef again. Now i'm wondering who to trust him, or that lady whose name starts with a D, that is escaping my mind right now.
Good Update! Loved seeing the Tombs again!
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Post by Tina ☺ on Feb 16, 2010 21:21:49 GMT -5
Ok, now I have to LMAO@Nellie riding off into the sunset alone and about it serving them all right! @karima!  @team Zhan! He must be the 'fourth dimension'! Hehe... Thanks Jill for the 'never disappoint comment. Hopefully I can keep that up...lol Thanks Holley and Jill for the comments on chapter 16! I was thinking it may have been too much 'tombing', but I guess it was good to get in a bit more 'tomb time'. Her name is Dalida. I only remember that because I have to type it so freaking much! Yeah... the game sort of threw me for a loop where Youssef is concerned. First, I made him one of the leaders of MorcuCorp, and then I find out that supposedly MorcuCorp is bad. So, I had to fit it all into the story somehow. Now it's really putting a strain on my brain. |
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Post by holleyberry on Feb 16, 2010 21:28:50 GMT -5
SPOILER ABOUT EGYPT!! Wait till Megacorp is the good guys and the resistance is bad |
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Post by jillyson on Feb 16, 2010 21:31:01 GMT -5
Yeah, but it's a tasty, drama-filled loop! Lol! It sure seems like you planned it all along!
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Post by Tina ☺ on Feb 16, 2010 22:20:39 GMT -5
LOL@Holley! Uh... okay. Thanks Jill! I guess it's a good thing I like to watch suspense, mystery, action, thrillier, and drama-type shows and movies. It helps to know how to deal with those twists and turns that come at ya! |
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Post by Aussie Karima on Feb 17, 2010 5:26:00 GMT -5
;D OK, I will have to go back & leave a message, AGAIN! as just as I was about to send it, that stupid Trojan scan tried to get me to install a program saying I had about 200 Trojans in my system, the funny thing was I was running a scan while reading your story, it was all clear, but for safety's sake I ran my Malaware, to make certain!  Annoying! Much! I throughly enjoyed the chapter, trips & all, poor confused Nellie, it is not enough that her love life is a confusing mess, now she has to work out, who she can trust to work with & for!  ;D Totaly had fun reading, but was expecting more! Tina fantastic job as always, & as always you left me wanting more! I'm still team Ho Sung!    |
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Post by Tina ☺ on Feb 17, 2010 8:13:36 GMT -5
Glad you liked it, Karima! ;D At least poor Ho Sung has one devoted follower. |
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