The Viper Valley Matriarch: Updated June 13th

[Nicole]

Chapter 2 Part 4: Finishing Up
Final bit of University, some whacked out sims... Mops and men.

UPDATE! Finally.

Many thanks to Tina for proof reading it for me. 'ppreciate it Tina, so much!

[Tina ☺]

Hey no prob! I'll pop over and read the finished version soon.

[Pixx]

Yay! I'll leave my comments at LJ

[Nicole]

Thanks Pixx! LJ comments are so handy. Lol.

[Tina ☺]

I commented there too Nicoled! I enjoyed your update. Thanks for posting the link!

[Pixx]

Love this legacy

[Nicole]

Chapter 3 Part 1: Babies and Chaos **NEW**
Beginnings of Generation Three (already?) some other fun stuff, as always.

Update time.

[Tina ☺]

Cool! Now I have two stories to entertain me over my morning coffee! ;D Thanks for alerting me Nicole!

[Nicole]

No problem, Tina!

[Tina ☺]

Good update Nicole! I comented at your LJ page.

[Nicole]

Thanks Tina, read and commented.

[Nicole]

Chapter 3 Part 2: Rolling Action
-Generation three grows, little to no cat appearances. Fun stuff, as always.

UPDATED! Yay!

[Tina ☺]

Cool! I'll read it over my morning coffee. Also, I'm hoping to get to that critique you asked for tomorrow. Your chapters are pretty short, so it shouldn't take me too long.

[Nicole]

Alrighty, you'll have a nice morning read. This chapter is 32 slides long, and there isn't a lot of text to them, so it'll take you a cup of coffee to get through it.

Take the time you need on the critique, I'm in no hurry.... And I BET there are spelling mistakes in this latest chapter.... I didn't proof, or spellcheck, and I did it in a hurry.

[Tina ☺]

Well for not proofing or spell checking and doing it in a hurry, you did VERY well! Your critique is up!

I commented a bit on LJ, but I'll say it here too. Nice update! Your twins are getting cuter all the time and... wow, what a cliffhanger ending! Nice job!