Me and My Past

[cubanray36]

thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_detail.php?asset_id=263203 ~ for chapter one

thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_detail.php?asset_id=264687 ~for chapter two

thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_detail.php?asset_id=265550 ~ chapter three

Hope you enjoy!

[Aussie Karima]

Ok, just so you know, I will be reading this but the EX is not behaving! your page can up then after I let it load,I turned the page, & got an error page three times!?! so, I will try later,& get back to you! ;D

[jillyson]

Hi Cubanray - what a twist THAT was! I can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks for posting this here for us to enjoy!

[valpre1983]

I'm with Jill on this one, no way would I have imagined that twist at the end of chapter two

[cubanray36]

Awww, thanks you guys, it took me awhile to figure out how to end the second chapter so it's great to hear it turned out good. The next chapter is going to be out some time soon. Hope you guys can give me your opion about the next to

[Tina ☺]

Hey, it's way cool you posted your links here! ;D Sorry I haven't gotten around to reading yet. I have been off my computer a LOT to take care of my mom because she had some ear surgery. As soon as I find the time, I am definitely going to read this.

[cubanray36]

Hey thats fine Hope she recovers well from the surgery, and take your time theres no rush really

[jillyson]

That's the beauty of posting them - they're here forever! Can't wait for the next chapter! Now you should feel really welcome - we're going to start nagging you to HURRY UP!!! Lol!!!

[cubanray36]

LoL! I really do feel welcome now!

[Tina ☺]

Apr 24, 2009 23:05:41 GMT -5 cubanray36 said:

Hey! It's finally out! I hope you guys enjoy chapter 3 of my "Me and my past" saga! Thank you everyone who critiqued my other two chapters!

thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_detail.php?asset_id=265550

Apr 25, 2009 6:52:38 GMT -5 @valpre1983 said:

Read it and loooved it...You good with cliff hangers and I love the new character's name...huh, Tina Valpre Wonder who's she's named after LOL. Can't wait to know more about Tina Valpre in the coming chapters!

Hey Ray... I've edited this thread to include your new chapter, quoted Valpre's comment, and am deleting the new thread you made for chapter three. Sorry about that, but it is customary to add new chapter links to the same thread. Just think... if we all made new threads for each chapter here, it would get quite confusing.

Therefore, whenever you make a new chapter, just edit your first post in this thread to include the link then make a new reply to alert everyone it's been updated. That way, we can cut down on confusion and keep things neat and tidy.

Hopefully later today I will be able to get to read this story. All the nice comments about it have definitely made me curious!

[Tina ☺]

OH no!!!! I just clicked your links to go read your story and all I got was 'asset not found'. What happened? Did you take them down?

[cubanray36]

Huh? No... hope nothing happend to it

[Tina ☺]

Well, they are there when I go to it from your simpage. Maybe it's just some sort of weird glitch or something.

Well, I finally read all the chapters. You have an interesting storyline going there. I saw quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes that shows me you would benefit greatly from a proof reader, but that hasn't seemed to affect your ratings.

Your story certainly has lots of twists and turns which cause one's curiosity to wonder what is going to happen next. VERY interesting name for your new character!

[cubanray36]

LoL, thanks! Ya, I saw the spelling mistakes after I sent it out. How would I go about getting it edited before it pops out on the sims 2?

[Tina ☺]

If you type out the text into microsoft word or works or email... whatever and send it to me, I'll be happy to proof read it for you, correct it, and send it back. I do this for several folks here already.

All you do to get it into the story editor is the copy each segment using the ctrl + c keys and then paste it into the story editor using the ctrl+ v keys.