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Post by qui on Mar 3, 2011 23:59:31 GMT -5
I second that! I love your poems!
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Post by nygirl on Mar 4, 2011 0:01:14 GMT -5
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Brianna
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[M0:14]Climbing one mountain at a time.[ss:Black/Purple]
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Post by Brianna on Mar 4, 2011 0:14:16 GMT -5
*runs off to read*
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jillyson
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Twozaks in Other Realms
[M0:6]"Now where have they gone? I seem to have lost my marbles again!" [ss:Luscious Lavender]
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Post by jillyson on Mar 6, 2011 10:54:56 GMT -5
NY Girl, you absolutely MUST submit your poetry somewhere. Contests, publishers, SOMEWHERE. Your poetry skills are so far beyond anything I would ever be capable of, and each and every one just completely blows me away. They way you turn a phrase is just magical.
Please, please sumbit these somewhere.
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Post by nygirl on Mar 6, 2011 14:25:44 GMT -5
NY Girl, you absolutely MUST submit your poetry somewhere. Contests, publishers, SOMEWHERE. Your poetry skills are so far beyond anything I would ever be capable of, and each and every one just completely blows me away. They way you turn a phrase is just magical. Please, please sumbit these somewhere. I have thought about it but never thought that they were really that great as most of them...well all of them I wrote as a young teen...of course there were a few revisions with some of them, wording and spelling but they are not edited that much. I don't usually share my poetry with many people, In fact only 2 people have every read these before I posted them and I have had them for 10-14 years. I am so glad that you and everyone else enjoyed them though!
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jillyson
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Twozaks in Other Realms
[M0:6]"Now where have they gone? I seem to have lost my marbles again!" [ss:Luscious Lavender]
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Post by jillyson on Mar 6, 2011 17:13:23 GMT -5
Really, your stories are great, but you have a rare, rare gift for poetry.
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Post by nygirl on Mar 7, 2011 15:19:45 GMT -5
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jillyson
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Twozaks in Other Realms
[M0:6]"Now where have they gone? I seem to have lost my marbles again!" [ss:Luscious Lavender]
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Post by jillyson on Mar 11, 2011 23:15:44 GMT -5
Love them, as always. on Waiting: is the speaker a ghost, or are they speaking to someone who died? It seems like a hint of supernatural!
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Post by nygirl on Mar 15, 2011 13:51:37 GMT -5
The speaker is meant to be a spirit/ghost/angel, which ever term the reader prefers.
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Post by nygirl on Mar 22, 2011 11:24:08 GMT -5
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jillyson
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Twozaks in Other Realms
[M0:6]"Now where have they gone? I seem to have lost my marbles again!" [ss:Luscious Lavender]
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Post by jillyson on Mar 22, 2011 12:45:24 GMT -5
This is so wonderful! My library hangs up a flyer about poetry competitions. Please, go check yours!
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Post by nygirl on Mar 22, 2011 14:10:51 GMT -5
This is so wonderful! My library hangs up a flyer about poetry competitions. Please, go check yours! I never even thought of that! Maybe I will check...assuming our Library is still open...thanks for that thought! Glad that you enjoyed the poem, he did as well though I had to explain it to him
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jillyson
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Twozaks in Other Realms
[M0:6]"Now where have they gone? I seem to have lost my marbles again!" [ss:Luscious Lavender]
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Post by jillyson on Mar 22, 2011 18:03:59 GMT -5
Well, he IS a guy! Lol!
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